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2024-03-14 21:44

As the TL said, if you like Tang San or nuanced perspectives in general, this novel won't be enjoyable. Tang San isn't just an antagonist here; he's a pure villain and he acts like it. There's no fairness, necessity, or the like. Wulin's character is also nasty here. He's not the super nice kid that existed in the main story. He's just a lustful antagonist who wants to take the heroine against her will with his dad's forceful hand. Outside of that, it's a power trip story for the MC.

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SAINT_of_ORIGIN
SAINT_of_ORIGINLv14

these low level authors do that to reduce the reader's sense of guilt. they think readers will feel guilty if they make them mildly antagonistic or do something bad to a good child unaware that the readers prefer to enjoy that or at least i do.

Venerable_Adam
Venerable_AdamLv4

i HATE tang san but tang wulin is innocent he would never force anyone to do anything

Yamette_Kutasai
Yamette_KutasaiLv4

The Tang Wulin in canon has different experience than this fanfic's Wulin, so it's not surprising he is darker compared to canon. Not to mention the canon Wulin has a smooth ride, so it is no wonder he maintained his naivety and innocence.

Falsic
FalsicLv15

There's a difference between a tougher version of a main character and the vile excuse of a human being that's laid out in this story.

Yamette_Kutasai:The Tang Wulin in canon has different experience than this fanfic's Wulin, so it's not surprising he is darker compared to canon. Not to mention the canon Wulin has a smooth ride, so it is no wonder he maintained his naivety and innocence.
Yamette_Kutasai
Yamette_KutasaiLv4

??? Losing to someone won't always results in tougher MC. That kind of thinking only exists in shounen-like manga 😂 Also, the canon is narrated from Wulin's perspective, so ofc it would never look as vile as when it was narrated from another's perspective. It's similar to Naruto's view that never look Hiruzen as vile.

Falsic:There's a difference between a tougher version of a main character and the vile excuse of a human being that's laid out in this story.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

the tang wulin in the novel and the tang wulin here are two different people with different experiences, its called a fanfic for a reason man so stop being hell bent on things staying the exact same, people change in response to their surrounding so this is to be expected (its like a what if naruto knew or experience this scenario).

Venerable_Adam:i HATE tang san but tang wulin is innocent he would never force anyone to do anything
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PhectMaphter
PhectMaphterLv5

Overall, I really like it, so I decided to review it to help the ratings a bit, it deserves more popularity. The story is fun, the magic system is cool and powerful without being absurd; it's a bit vague but still cool. I also enjoy stories that slap Tang San, the micromanaging psychopath, so this is a plus too. Writing Quality: it's pretty good. It's a translation of course, so you can't expect masterpieces, but it's perfectly understandable with little to no mistakes. My only complaint is that chapters are a bit short, but it's not the translator's fault. Stability of Updates: it seems like 2 chapters daily, at the time of writing this, which is a good update frequency. Story Development: It's interesting, follows roughly the main plot points of DD3, but that's to be expected. MC snatches Tang Wulin's opportunities and has some of his own, and I like the direction where the story is going. Character Design: MC is rather boring at the start, and he feels like an old man. But while he doesn't like to fight, he has plenty of spine and is decisive. The storytime, when he takes advantage of his metaknowledge, is fun whenever it happens, and his teatime habit is fun too. I also really like his relationship with the female lead, they are equal partners and good friends, and while they are a couple now, and they're close, I wish there was some more romance there though. I was hoping for more sweetness, you know? The canon characters are accurate enough, and don't seem 2-dimensional. You end up caring for the protagonist's team. The antagonists also are proper characters, even if there isn't that much tension, since you know MC is going to win somehow. But that's good too. World Background: It's Douluo Dalu 3 fanfiction, there's not much place for error if you follow the story. Whatever changes from the plot make sense when you count them as butterflies set forth by MC.

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The_Grand_Warden · Book&Literature
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