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Kurama24
Kurama24Lv41yr
2024-01-04 22:22

(Harem Spoiler below): 1st of all a thanks to the translator for translating this ff bcz overall it's a really enjoyable fanfic with unique choices for powers and worlds. The only 2 downsides are that if u haven't read or watched the anime of some worlds u will be bored and confused about some things. The 2nd downside is the Author's failure in making the harem believable/acceptable. The Mc is a 13 yr old shota that got 5 women from naruto (tsunade, shizune, ino, hinata, himawari), 4 from guilty crown (inori/mana, tsugumi, ayase, hiraki), and all 6 of his chat members (yami, mikata, la fiola, yuno, kurumi, emilia) and that's not including the danmachi arc yet which i started (ch.150 atm) he has inori next to him yet he openly flirts with chloe and syr.... his solution to this is just sleeping with inori to calm her down since inori and tsugumi accepted the harem idea due to "stamina issues". So yeah nice ff but with a perverted mc that has a functioning pokemon harem due to author bs.

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Kurama24
Kurama24Lv4

yeah change of review, 3 stars. Mana's yandere behavior is just annoying/exhausting af so im gonna drop for a while until I'm in the mood to recontinue it

dankoku
dankokuLv4

I disagree with your 3.5 star review here to be honest. First off, it isn't the fanfic's problem that you haven't read/watched the works associated in the fanfic. Second off, did you really come read a mashup-anime/comic fanfic that even has a chat group type system (as far as I've read in these, it's always a pokemon harem with 99% of the group members being female) expecting some sort of good romance and non pokemon harem? [also slight correction, It's Hanabi and not Himawari]

Kurama24
Kurama24Lv4

1st of all i expected it to be a multiversal harem from the beginning and I'm not against it. I'm disappointed by the fact the mc doesn't try to make the harem functional but instead goes collecting them as if there's a shopping sales so that's minus 1 star. The minus half star is for the accumulation of tiny mistakes whether it's spelling, plot hole, or not explaining something bcz u expect the reader to know all the anime u write about... Anyway it's not like what i said is wrong so if u still disagree then whatever I'm just giving my opinion so new readers can know what to expect instead of 5 stars and "wow this fics is good I love it sooo much"

dankoku:I disagree with your 3.5 star review here to be honest. First off, it isn't the fanfic's problem that you haven't read/watched the works associated in the fanfic. Second off, did you really come read a mashup-anime/comic fanfic that even has a chat group type system (as far as I've read in these, it's always a pokemon harem with 99% of the group members being female) expecting some sort of good romance and non pokemon harem? [also slight correction, It's Hanabi and not Himawari]
Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3

If you dont mind me asking, what exactly is the appeal of these super large harems?? Like im not tryna insult it or anything, but in my opinion, having a large harem just shouldnt even be called romance, since i cant imagine someone loving 30 different people, the same amount. And if you dont love them the same, why even start a harem

dankoku:I disagree with your 3.5 star review here to be honest. First off, it isn't the fanfic's problem that you haven't read/watched the works associated in the fanfic. Second off, did you really come read a mashup-anime/comic fanfic that even has a chat group type system (as far as I've read in these, it's always a pokemon harem with 99% of the group members being female) expecting some sort of good romance and non pokemon harem? [also slight correction, It's Hanabi and not Himawari]
DaoistHeartAttack
DaoistHeartAttackLv3

The incels like those kinds of pokemon harem.

Aaden_:If you dont mind me asking, what exactly is the appeal of these super large harems?? Like im not tryna insult it or anything, but in my opinion, having a large harem just shouldnt even be called romance, since i cant imagine someone loving 30 different people, the same amount. And if you dont love them the same, why even start a harem
MF_THE_BOTH
MF_THE_BOTHLv5

damn too bad if the too much harem problem didn't exist I would read this

TheSlumberingWolf
TheSlumberingWolfLv4

There is nothing in existence where love is equally distributed, so the very foundation of your comment is literally retarded.

Aaden_:If you dont mind me asking, what exactly is the appeal of these super large harems?? Like im not tryna insult it or anything, but in my opinion, having a large harem just shouldnt even be called romance, since i cant imagine someone loving 30 different people, the same amount. And if you dont love them the same, why even start a harem
TheSlumberingWolf
TheSlumberingWolfLv4

Well... given your too few brain cells, I'm sure it would balance it out there, kiddo. So you have nothing to worry about.

MF_THE_BOTH:damn too bad if the too much harem problem didn't exist I would read this
MF_THE_BOTH
MF_THE_BOTHLv5

sure...

TheSlumberingWolf:Well... given your too few brain cells, I'm sure it would balance it out there, kiddo. So you have nothing to worry about.
Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3

what is the point of your comment? are you trying to support monogamy, or saying that theres no difference between a small harem and a big harem? the point of my comment was that i cant imagine loving a dozen different people the same amount, and if you dont love them the same, i feel you should just be in a relationship with who you love the most

TheSlumberingWolf:There is nothing in existence where love is equally distributed, so the very foundation of your comment is literally retarded.
TheSlumberingWolf
TheSlumberingWolfLv4

I'm saying you're opinion is invalid by the very nature of you not comprehending how love works.

Aaden_:what is the point of your comment? are you trying to support monogamy, or saying that theres no difference between a small harem and a big harem? the point of my comment was that i cant imagine loving a dozen different people the same amount, and if you dont love them the same, i feel you should just be in a relationship with who you love the most
Xilt
XiltLv3

only child choose. men take all. and this shit was fiction so...

Aaden_:what is the point of your comment? are you trying to support monogamy, or saying that theres no difference between a small harem and a big harem? the point of my comment was that i cant imagine loving a dozen different people the same amount, and if you dont love them the same, i feel you should just be in a relationship with who you love the most
Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3

are you a mf caveman 💀

Xilt:only child choose. men take all. and this shit was fiction so...
Xilt
XiltLv3

yes

Aaden_:are you a mf caveman 💀
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