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VastokingLv51yr
2024-01-10 12:57

The story started really losing its touch after the chat group area, not that the chat group was bad, but what's the point of making mc be an assassin in his past life when he isnt even acting like one, he is wayy too immature for someone in that. The author is also VERY HORRENDOUS at writing female characters. As for the good parts, its interesting and engaging, the story is very funny, at times though it feels the author pursues a more lecherous mc or ignores proper character interactions for comedy or hornii. Over all Its ok.

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_Nia
_NiaAuthor

Well why not its a lovely fic all the praise to author DE_LEON :D

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Zailo95
Zailo95Lv14

I’m completely loving this story so far. This ff is very good, especially for a translated story, I see little to no mistakes at all so far. The character interactions are quite nice and can be quite funny some times, what I love most about this is how much chapters are being pumped out so far. The updating has been extremely consistent and plentiful as well. The fact that in this ff there are some worlds and characters being mentioned that usually aren’t even thought of in other ff’s makes the experience reading even better. I hope this stories thrives and I don’t see it getting dropped, thank you!

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Kurama24
Kurama24Lv4

(Harem Spoiler below): 1st of all a thanks to the translator for translating this ff bcz overall it's a really enjoyable fanfic with unique choices for powers and worlds. The only 2 downsides are that if u haven't read or watched the anime of some worlds u will be bored and confused about some things. The 2nd downside is the Author's failure in making the harem believable/acceptable. The Mc is a 13 yr old shota that got 5 women from naruto (tsunade, shizune, ino, hinata, himawari), 4 from guilty crown (inori/mana, tsugumi, ayase, hiraki), and all 6 of his chat members (yami, mikata, la fiola, yuno, kurumi, emilia) and that's not including the danmachi arc yet which i started (ch.150 atm) he has inori next to him yet he openly flirts with chloe and syr.... his solution to this is just sleeping with inori to calm her down since inori and tsugumi accepted the harem idea due to "stamina issues". So yeah nice ff but with a perverted mc that has a functioning pokemon harem due to author bs.

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SpiralCat
SpiralCatLv14

I like this story, but unfortunately, it's not in english, and now I found the translation version of this story. Instant 5 star.

1yr
DetectiveHarem
DetectiveHaremLv14

I have always wanted to read this novel, unfortunately it is in a different language, but now thanks to you I am finally able to read it in english. Starting the next day I will donate my stone everyday.

1yr
leang
leangLv1

I read the original and I'm glad someone translated it because the web novel community is mostly English speaking and I feel like the original novel didn't get the support it deserved due to the language barrier. I hope this encourages the original author to write chapters more regularly, although from chapter 1 he made it clear that the novel was just to kill time. Thanks for the translation.

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George_Vasiliu
George_VasiliuLv3

story's good but the power system/ rules /characters are a mess... even the MC .There are too many contrivances at every turn and they don't even benefit the plot

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Chromeal
ChromealLv13

Reveal spoiler

6mth
Spiroo
SpirooLv4

I've already read the original, so Automatic 5 stars

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