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Review Detail of JustAReaders in Reality Bender System, Marvel

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I believe it had potential but my real problem is there are so many skills that have no dominant connection other than the race. She can literally do everything which not only makes your job as an author difficult to make it seems like you mc isn't stupid, but makes reading it confusing even after you fused several skills in a chapter it still made it difficult and in honesty if the plan was to merge them all maybe doing it during system bestowal so you can just get it down with.

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Reality Bender System, Marvel

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Thanks so much for the review! Thanks also for the feedback I'll have a look into the things you have brought up. (Not promising anything.)