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Alex_Simmonds
Alex_SimmondsAuthor1yr
2023-12-17 00:50

Shameless Author review! Anyway, this is my first time writing a fan-fiction and i hope you all enjoy it. I plan to have fantasy, sci-fi and other elements scattered throughout the story and plan to have romance in there as well (It will be a Yuri). Please feel free to leave comments, i love them, have a good day/night.

Reality Bender System, Marvel

Alex_Simmonds
4.6
397 Chs

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DaoistyhmT6N
DaoistyhmT6NLv4

I hope you continue, it looks good!

1yr
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Alex_Simmonds
Alex_SimmondsAuthor

Thanks for your support!

DaoistyhmT6N:I hope you continue, it looks good!
1yr
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clemdarkangel555
clemdarkangel555Lv4

I’m starting to wonder why the 2/3 of the stories with female main persona are yuris. Not that I hate it, the contrary, but since it does not correspond at all to reality, it surprises me. In any case, the idea looks interesting, I hope I will like and thank you in adavance for your work.

1yr
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Alex_Simmonds
Alex_SimmondsAuthor

Yes it's an interesting trend... I personally like yuri stories as they are just fresh for me, especially seeing as how a lot of other stories are just a man being a playboy and so on, gaining a massive harem. Anyway, thanks for the comment, hope you enjoy my fan fic!

clemdarkangel555:I’m starting to wonder why the 2/3 of the stories with female main persona are yuris. Not that I hate it, the contrary, but since it does not correspond at all to reality, it surprises me. In any case, the idea looks interesting, I hope I will like and thank you in adavance for your work.
1yr
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DarkCreation101
DarkCreation101Lv11

agreed

Alex_Simmonds:Yes it's an interesting trend... I personally like yuri stories as they are just fresh for me, especially seeing as how a lot of other stories are just a man being a playboy and so on, gaining a massive harem. Anyway, thanks for the comment, hope you enjoy my fan fic!
1yr
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Artem_5195
Artem_5195Lv2

Why is the story very similar to the fallen hemer. Author, I hope you won’t copy too much, if you don’t have enough of your own ideas, be inspired by as many fan fictions and novels as possible. Then if you build everything correctly, for example, if you get inspired, you will come up with a story that will even be unique.

1yr
Alex_Simmonds
Alex_SimmondsAuthor

I have already said that i was originally inspired by Fallen Gamer, my story has been evolving over time, so don't worry, it does change in later chapters.

Artem_5195:Why is the story very similar to the fallen hemer. Author, I hope you won’t copy too much, if you don’t have enough of your own ideas, be inspired by as many fan fictions and novels as possible. Then if you build everything correctly, for example, if you get inspired, you will come up with a story that will even be unique.
1yr
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ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

Found yours more engaging. But… is there really polygamy in the relationships, it’s making me esitate reading more.

Alex_Simmonds:I have already said that i was originally inspired by Fallen Gamer, my story has been evolving over time, so don't worry, it does change in later chapters.
1yr
Alex_Simmonds
Alex_SimmondsAuthor

There is multiple partners... Don't worry they all get character development and such, i won't ignore them, even if i have to make independent chapters of them experiencing something!

ScarletQC:Found yours more engaging. But… is there really polygamy in the relationships, it’s making me esitate reading more.
1yr
ScarletQC
ScarletQCLv14

I mean, they’re only going to be romantically and shrexually involved with the MC and not between each other. Yes or no.

Alex_Simmonds:There is multiple partners... Don't worry they all get character development and such, i won't ignore them, even if i have to make independent chapters of them experiencing something!
1yr
Alex_Simmonds
Alex_SimmondsAuthor

Mainly just them and MC... May be a few encounters with multiple but we'll see.

ScarletQC:I mean, they’re only going to be romantically and shrexually involved with the MC and not between each other. Yes or no.
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Nova_Lagacy
Nova_LagacyLv13

can you pls describe her looks I don't know if I missed it but am at ch11 and don't still know what she looks like pls

Alex_Simmonds:Mainly just them and MC... May be a few encounters with multiple but we'll see.
1yr
Alex_Simmonds
Alex_SimmondsAuthor

Chapter 11: I stepped over towards the mirror that was placed against the wall, it must have served as a tool to teach magic as every now and then it shimmered in opalescent light. I stepped to the front of the mirror the first thing to come into focus was the heart-shaped face with lilac hair that fell either side of my face, I turned my body to find that the hair reached midway down my back. As I stepped back to try and fully examine my body I saw my 'stats' I had relatively large breasts that seemed to stay perfectly upright despite gravities' best attempts. My body was rather lithe and seemed athletic. 

Nova_Lagacy:can you pls describe her looks I don't know if I missed it but am at ch11 and don't still know what she looks like pls
1yr
Nova_Lagacy
Nova_LagacyLv13

thanks 👍

Alex_Simmonds:Chapter 11: I stepped over towards the mirror that was placed against the wall, it must have served as a tool to teach magic as every now and then it shimmered in opalescent light. I stepped to the front of the mirror the first thing to come into focus was the heart-shaped face with lilac hair that fell either side of my face, I turned my body to find that the hair reached midway down my back. As I stepped back to try and fully examine my body I saw my 'stats' I had relatively large breasts that seemed to stay perfectly upright despite gravities' best attempts. My body was rather lithe and seemed athletic. 
1yr
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

There's not a lot of yuri stories compared to other genres, in my opinion, and even though there a good chunk of them, many either don't get updated frequently or just get dropped. So bless you, kind author, for giving us yuri

Alex_Simmonds:Yes it's an interesting trend... I personally like yuri stories as they are just fresh for me, especially seeing as how a lot of other stories are just a man being a playboy and so on, gaining a massive harem. Anyway, thanks for the comment, hope you enjoy my fan fic!
1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Heh, in a way, it's better than Fallen Gamer since you update so often, hahaha. Although I still read FG, yours is superior atm

Alex_Simmonds:I have already said that i was originally inspired by Fallen Gamer, my story has been evolving over time, so don't worry, it does change in later chapters.
1yr
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Rakshahsa
RakshahsaLv4

how shameless!!

1yr
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Abyssal_Vormunne
Abyssal_VormunneLv1

Alex, its a New Year, are still continue to update this Novel, or are you just gonna abandoned it to dust

3mth
immortal_sword
immortal_swordLv13

is this dropped

Alex_Simmonds:Thanks for your support!
3mth
Alex_Simmonds
Alex_SimmondsAuthor

I am on break from it... I'll probably come back to it soon!

immortal_sword:is this dropped
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DaoistyhmT6N
DaoistyhmT6NLv4

looks great so far! the mc is cool story is nice abd the system is kind of unique

1yr

Wizardlyllc
WizardlyllcLv14

nah it not stail it actually pretty great story😁 so so pretty please continue your amazing work author🥺 ps. and don't let no one read this part I might get hate mail for this but I have say this author I like story but you need get some rest maybe a few days or a week. it can't be writing new characters everyday you need sleep.

1yr
BigBud
BigBudLv4

Pretty decent OP MC with system story so far. MC seems to lack all critical thinking skills and is unable to do basic tasks without advice from her system. MC is also quite a fangirl for the other characters, but that is understandable, you would be lying if you said you wouldn’t be in awe upon seeing the real life Harry Potter. Other than the MC’s lack of backbone it’s pretty well written and not too nonsensical so far

1yr
DarkAce_Ghosts
DarkAce_GhostsLv12

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Fu_Hua_
Fu_Hua_Lv4

I haven't yet finished reading every chapters but I have to say though the Fangirling Mc is just ruining this for me and it's getting harder for me to continue reading cause my enthusiasm is slowly crumbling.BUT even though I don't like the MC's personality in the earlier chapters I'll continue to read hoping her Fangirling will tone down eventually.Anyways, here's my 5 stars

1yr
Naruto_Tiny
Naruto_TinyLv4

More, please!

1yr
JustAReaders
JustAReadersLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Jackleell
JackleellLv1

I have mixed feelings about the character and the narrative structure. The protagonist often comes across as overly reliant on the system granted to her, which diminishes her independence and personal growth. Her lack of initiative in boosting her intelligence and delving deeper into sciences or other areas of knowledge is a bit disappointing. This over-reliance on the system doesn't allow her character to fully explore her potential or develop self-reliance, which could have added more depth to her journey. Moreover, there's a notable lack of clarity regarding the entity that bestowed her powers. Understanding the entity's motives and the broader implications of these powers would add a much-needed layer of intrigue and complexity to the story. The origins and goals of this entity remain a mystery, which can be intriguing but also a bit frustrating from a narrative perspective. I would suggest an interesting plot development where the system develops its own separate entity, potentially even being removed from the protagonist's body. This could open up avenues for exploring themes like the consequences of power and the moral dilemmas of using such abilities. It could also lead to a deeper understanding of the 'Reality Bender' concept, perhaps hinting at the entity's enjoyment in manipulating or even destroying realities. Such a development could be an excellent opportunity for foreshadowing and adding a rich layer of suspense and complexity to the story. anyways i still enjoy this story.

1yr
Leon_Joseph
Leon_JosephLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Patrick_hell123
Patrick_hell123Lv15

you are getting better and better at writing

1yr
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