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2024-03-08 08:48

How to say it, well i read it to chapter 122, so far it's a bit messy, she gain trust to fast , she dont really develop her ability. if i need to say the story is developping to fast, she marry to fast, go to another world to fast. from chapter 1 to 122 it's harry potter x marvel and marvel x stargate , there are not really a lot a things appart seeing her get women, 2/3 battle, getting atlantis and making proposal to her women and getting them pregnant. and her species/abilities is a bit messy. this story has a lot of potential, i quite like it, but how is it written is not my type. But i like it, but the fact that she can go to other universe as she like and the story is not developping in one universe but is a mix of different universe/story is a bit confusing. (sorry english is not my native language)

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i like : the species of the heroine ( angel/ vampie-demon ) Harem - marriage - pregancy Marvel universe Divinity dislike : too much wives too fast not fully developing a universe before going to another harry potter universe only 1/2 chapter per event (battle of iron man , thor, X-men) the fact that she can go to other universe (multiverse other than marvel (stargate, warhammer...) )

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