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Luohuo
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2024-05-06 03:05

I won't lie, i was getting bored with how dragged on the arc before grand wedding was but i al glad i didn't dropped, the ending for how the entire arc with seph and the torture he and his two little soon to be brides and his mother suffered was fantastic. that was truly fantastically done and i love you for that (no h*mo). the entire mystery of mc dark star fate and involvement of lia was really interesting and am looking forward to it. even the girl who stayed loyal to roland till the end was so good. you hardly ever see a women like that and i was genuinely surprise and glad at the same time that she asked mc to kill her which he did. thoughhis harem is still kinda up in the air and i don't truly know who can be in the harem and who won't yet. Mc mother, 2 sisters, soph, soph's sister and su for now i think will be in the harem. I wonder if there will be lovers from higher world too, and it would be interesting to see how he will deal with fate as well. overall it's a pretty good novel. tho a heads up, mc doesn't discriminate against wh**ver is his enemy so be warn.

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Started for good and ended for bad (at the time of 224 chapters). In the first few chapters, the main character was really doing what he was supposed to be doing, but as the story went on, the less attention the author started to pay to it all. This makes it seem like he's just another protagonist who wanders around the world doing all sorts of things. Okay, if only that, but as the plot progresses, the intelligence of our hero falls exponentially, and logic and began to go out for a smoke (for example, high-level martial arts experts can not think of holding their breath so as not to die from smoke. And there are tons of examples like that). Also, cultivation seems to be purely for show. No one will tell us what the differences between the levels of cultivation are, what their features are, etc. They just are and that's it. Get over it. That's the reason why gg doesn't level up, even if he has enough points. He doesn't level up just because. The author tried to give some sort of explanation, but it was some random throw-in rather than anything clarifying. There's not much to say about the world structure. We were given some basic information at the beginning and that's it. Don't expect any more details. The characters, as befits the genre, are cardboard. It seems that the author is trying to create drama (which, more often than not, is out of place) to make the reader empathize with the secondary characters, but alas, everything looks rather artificial and dry. The only one who shows any character and is "alive" is our hero, but it's also very bad. We are shown his personality and beliefs based on a lot of plot holes. There were moments when he had a real way out of the situation, but at that moment his aikyu has fallen to a negative value, and he does not take advantage of all the opportunities only to then stand pompously in front of the mirror and argue about the fact that he is too weak. And that kind of thing, to me, looks very ridiculous and inappropriate. Because of which you simply do not believe in the growth of our hero's personality. The combat, by the way, is as dull, boring and uninteresting as possible. When I got to the ongoings, I actually flipped through whole pages with the description of the fight, so it was tedious to read. And the villains and main characters are just one plot hole.

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