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ERFANLv39mth
2024-04-01 19:43

This is my real opinion, after reading the rest of the article, if we consider the heroes as one faction and the villains as one faction, the third category is definitely the idiots, and MC is one of them (more like a hypocrite now. And a stupid villain). . In fact, he is not a villain or a hero, he is stupid, shocking and crazy. It has strange tendencies, but the world building of the story is good. It would have been much better if the MC had a calm and cool personality and tried to use heroes and villains instead of getting involved. In the current situation of the novel, the author has made the other characters more stupid to make the main character smarter. In any case, if you read this novel, you will be disappointed with both the hero and the villain. Although this is a story, but if you read psychology, you will realize how wrong the concept of the novel is, there is no good and bad, and recently the author has used terrible dramas, and also, while reading, you feel that the story is changing every moment. It's like the author is changing his mind. To be honest, I've read worse novels than this one, but this novel makes me angry, it's so bad that everyone is wrong, in any case, it's good, spend your time, just skip the parts of MC's mother😵(google translate)

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kbm_shill
kbm_shillLv4

What happened to MC's mother?

Sagar_Chavan_4157
Sagar_Chavan_4157Lv1

yeah story is all over the place.. at one point i thought its gonna take academy route.. it was good till then.. there was nice setup.. regretting mother and sister, cocky villain and hero with both of them having their system meanwhile mc with hes system and unique story take.. an underground boss lady sofia.. but then author threw all these setup out of the window.. even sofia and made mc go underground with different identity.. seriously 0 love intrest.. unnecessary mother - son drama.. randomly throwing hes birth is testube? setting mother- adoptive son romance i guess? although writing is nice and all.. plot is unstable af.. harem and romance tag is fake.. except mc.. everyone getting some action with their lives.. i aint masochist to read 500+ chap of mc suffering, hiding and running away..

ERFAN
ERFANLv3

you also feel that MC behaves like a masochist, whatever trouble happens to him is because of himself, even if the hero or villain didn't interfere in his life, he wouldn't have a good life.

Sagar_Chavan_4157:yeah story is all over the place.. at one point i thought its gonna take academy route.. it was good till then.. there was nice setup.. regretting mother and sister, cocky villain and hero with both of them having their system meanwhile mc with hes system and unique story take.. an underground boss lady sofia.. but then author threw all these setup out of the window.. even sofia and made mc go underground with different identity.. seriously 0 love intrest.. unnecessary mother - son drama.. randomly throwing hes birth is testube? setting mother- adoptive son romance i guess? although writing is nice and all.. plot is unstable af.. harem and romance tag is fake.. except mc.. everyone getting some action with their lives.. i aint masochist to read 500+ chap of mc suffering, hiding and running away..
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Lollipop1337
Lollipop1337Lv1

Started for good and ended for bad (at the time of 224 chapters). In the first few chapters, the main character was really doing what he was supposed to be doing, but as the story went on, the less attention the author started to pay to it all. This makes it seem like he's just another protagonist who wanders around the world doing all sorts of things. Okay, if only that, but as the plot progresses, the intelligence of our hero falls exponentially, and logic and began to go out for a smoke (for example, high-level martial arts experts can not think of holding their breath so as not to die from smoke. And there are tons of examples like that). Also, cultivation seems to be purely for show. No one will tell us what the differences between the levels of cultivation are, what their features are, etc. They just are and that's it. Get over it. That's the reason why gg doesn't level up, even if he has enough points. He doesn't level up just because. The author tried to give some sort of explanation, but it was some random throw-in rather than anything clarifying. There's not much to say about the world structure. We were given some basic information at the beginning and that's it. Don't expect any more details. The characters, as befits the genre, are cardboard. It seems that the author is trying to create drama (which, more often than not, is out of place) to make the reader empathize with the secondary characters, but alas, everything looks rather artificial and dry. The only one who shows any character and is "alive" is our hero, but it's also very bad. We are shown his personality and beliefs based on a lot of plot holes. There were moments when he had a real way out of the situation, but at that moment his aikyu has fallen to a negative value, and he does not take advantage of all the opportunities only to then stand pompously in front of the mirror and argue about the fact that he is too weak. And that kind of thing, to me, looks very ridiculous and inappropriate. Because of which you simply do not believe in the growth of our hero's personality. The combat, by the way, is as dull, boring and uninteresting as possible. When I got to the ongoings, I actually flipped through whole pages with the description of the fight, so it was tedious to read. And the villains and main characters are just one plot hole.

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