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Ar3
Ar3Lv41yr
2024-02-26 21:13

#harem is a lie im already at the current chapters, around 180 and the heroine is not confirm even tho its confirm because he still hasnt confess, according to him. the only disappointed i guess is that the villian are already stealing heroine at protagonist collecting hero. MC has nothing. im not sure if thats the point of the novel but it has #harem #18 and I dont see that anywhere. even the mild #18 is from the pov of the villian. which as reader is not evem interesting

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Ar3
Ar3Lv4

also forgot to mention. that even tho its not ntr. but it felt like it. and when is he even gonna kill the first villain at the start. getting powerup is taking too long for that

Sunless_8019
Sunless_8019Lv2

su lin still hasn't joined the harem?

BuscadorDelDao
BuscadorDelDaoLv11

totalmente deacuerdo , tenia muchas esperanzas con esta novela , pero desde q llegue a la trama de la madre , se volvio muy pesado , se q el autor dijo q esperos pero es complicado , no tengo puntos infinitos

Sagar_Chavan_4157
Sagar_Chavan_4157Lv1

dogged a bullet there.. i was actually looking forward to academy arc.. i knew it was cliche and all but i was still in for ride cuz writing and nice face slapping.. rn im on 48 and bruhh he kinda forget abt teacher and sofia already.. academy arc has thrown outta window and now hes on different mission without even getting rid of existing foes.. also it feels like villains and protogonists (not our mc) getting more action with their love life than mc.. i mean i respect that mc is on path of chad and all.. still feels bad that he doesn't even have single romantic interest.. ik there are lotta setups for him but if all those setups are gonna play out after 500+ chaps.. i'll just stop rn and come back.. it feels like writer recived some feedback and he completely abandoned orignal plot and setting up new plot now.. it started well with mc's madness attitude which i really enjoyed.. but story is all over the place..imma come back after some good stable developement

Generic_007
Generic_007Lv4

Well, bro already became a god (although temporary)💀💀 maybe now u can read it

Ar3:also forgot to mention. that even tho its not ntr. but it felt like it. and when is he even gonna kill the first villain at the start. getting powerup is taking too long for that
KacbRe
KacbReLv10

lol NTR

Dark_Shadow_4384
Dark_Shadow_4384Lv3

Yeah man. The author letter even tried to fix it. But it made it even worse.

Ar3:also forgot to mention. that even tho its not ntr. but it felt like it. and when is he even gonna kill the first villain at the start. getting powerup is taking too long for that
Rheizz
RheizzLv14

the author dodged your comment it means that you're correct bro 💀💀

Ar3
Ar3Lv4

feels like the author is a ntr enjoyer. 💀

Rheizz:the author dodged your comment it means that you're correct bro 💀💀
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Lollipop1337
Lollipop1337Lv1

Started for good and ended for bad (at the time of 224 chapters). In the first few chapters, the main character was really doing what he was supposed to be doing, but as the story went on, the less attention the author started to pay to it all. This makes it seem like he's just another protagonist who wanders around the world doing all sorts of things. Okay, if only that, but as the plot progresses, the intelligence of our hero falls exponentially, and logic and began to go out for a smoke (for example, high-level martial arts experts can not think of holding their breath so as not to die from smoke. And there are tons of examples like that). Also, cultivation seems to be purely for show. No one will tell us what the differences between the levels of cultivation are, what their features are, etc. They just are and that's it. Get over it. That's the reason why gg doesn't level up, even if he has enough points. He doesn't level up just because. The author tried to give some sort of explanation, but it was some random throw-in rather than anything clarifying. There's not much to say about the world structure. We were given some basic information at the beginning and that's it. Don't expect any more details. The characters, as befits the genre, are cardboard. It seems that the author is trying to create drama (which, more often than not, is out of place) to make the reader empathize with the secondary characters, but alas, everything looks rather artificial and dry. The only one who shows any character and is "alive" is our hero, but it's also very bad. We are shown his personality and beliefs based on a lot of plot holes. There were moments when he had a real way out of the situation, but at that moment his aikyu has fallen to a negative value, and he does not take advantage of all the opportunities only to then stand pompously in front of the mirror and argue about the fact that he is too weak. And that kind of thing, to me, looks very ridiculous and inappropriate. Because of which you simply do not believe in the growth of our hero's personality. The combat, by the way, is as dull, boring and uninteresting as possible. When I got to the ongoings, I actually flipped through whole pages with the description of the fight, so it was tedious to read. And the villains and main characters are just one plot hole.

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