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Raventan
RaventanLv141yr
2023-12-16 20:01

is good but i hope you will not add harem in the story because the harem thing usually make author lost focus it will end up bad somehow....................

In Marvel with Greatest System

Boring_World
4.0
140 Chs

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IAMABSOLUTE_GOD
IAMABSOLUTE_GODLv3

Agree with you fellow Disciple

1yr
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real777
real777Lv14

Hope no harem

1yr
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Kaido_Cone_5786
Kaido_Cone_5786Lv4

harem for the win

1yr
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Hugo_Adam
Hugo_AdamLv4

1yr
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IMDOOMED
IMDOOMEDLv14

After a certain fascination with harem themes, I came to realize, with excessive exposure, that numerous chapters were indulging in superfluous and frustrating elements. Now, I aspire to encounter literary works reminiscent of 'The Journey to the One Piece,' where each chapter holds value without wasting time on explicit content. Similarly, 'Dragon Ball Alternative' reflects this notion. I yearn for harem-themed novels akin to these examples, absent of unnecessary chapters and R18-rated vulgarity, focusing solely on an engaging storyline.

1yr
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Iceyunderground
IceyundergroundLv4

Try, "Meta essence gotcha in Marvel". It's available here on WebNovel.

IMDOOMED:After a certain fascination with harem themes, I came to realize, with excessive exposure, that numerous chapters were indulging in superfluous and frustrating elements. Now, I aspire to encounter literary works reminiscent of 'The Journey to the One Piece,' where each chapter holds value without wasting time on explicit content. Similarly, 'Dragon Ball Alternative' reflects this notion. I yearn for harem-themed novels akin to these examples, absent of unnecessary chapters and R18-rated vulgarity, focusing solely on an engaging storyline.
1yr
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Deep_Pal_2626
Deep_Pal_2626Lv14

please no harem in Marvel... It ain't DxD or Azur Lane

1yr
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Red_Flame_0460
Red_Flame_0460Lv4

Hugo_Adam:
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Helios_Sol
Helios_SolLv5

harem is the best path to walk

1yr
12
Jetboy76
Jetboy76Lv15

Harem for life!馃槀

1yr
7
Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3

Why is this pinned 馃え

1yr
Big_boi457
Big_boi457Lv13

Red_Flame_0460:
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Artist_Arton
Artist_ArtonLv4

Big_boi457:
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BlackSoverain
BlackSoverainLv12

I wouldn't say that the Harem theme is the main issue. It's mostly the depravity that is the main cause of those type of stories hate. Let's be real here. Once the snu snu starts, most authors loses themselves into letting there MCs become horny teenagers neglecting there plot overall even becoming a glorified waifu collectathon.

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Novel will probably be dropped soon. Considering the Overpowered MC, inconsistent Power set, and abilities from all over the place, This story will get harder for the author to continue.Also, from the Way the words and sentences are used, one could see it the writings of a newbie.It's good, considering he's probably a beginner who's out to have fun writing a whole new story, but down the line, even he himself will get bored or confused on how to go forward.The most off putting aspect of this is the World Traveling. When I saw him leaving the Marvel world, I simply dropped the book. It ain't worth it

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Tazrune
TazruneLv3

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khazar
khazarLv5

it's a brain dead fanfiction . too much useless details the MC is overpowered yet useless. the story is anywhere but marvel . there is no story development as main marvel universe hasn't gone anywhere it's just world hopping. I tried to be generous rating this.

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SAWOEN
SAWOENLv11

The book is missing alot of details The book is missing world details Everything just jumping from point to point Everything feels rushed But still good overall

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FlammableFire
FlammableFireLv11

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