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This_Young_Lord
This_Young_LordLv141yr
2023-12-26 03:32

Novel will probably be dropped soon. Considering the Overpowered MC, inconsistent Power set, and abilities from all over the place, This story will get harder for the author to continue.Also, from the Way the words and sentences are used, one could see it the writings of a newbie.It's good, considering he's probably a beginner who's out to have fun writing a whole new story, but down the line, even he himself will get bored or confused on how to go forward.The most off putting aspect of this is the World Traveling. When I saw him leaving the Marvel world, I simply dropped the book. It ain't worth it

In Marvel with Greatest System

Boring_World
4.0
140 Chs

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Boring_World
Boring_WorldAuthor

don't worry buddy, you probably haven't read marvel comics, that's why you are saying my oc is op but continue reading yo are in for a surprise

1yr
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Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

Author san a question, isn't creating clones with personality may case problems later ,since in the end people who know these clones are treating them as such ?I feel conflict about this subject ,and also is there feedback loop between mc and clones like if one learns the other gets it?

Boring_World:don't worry buddy, you probably haven't read marvel comics, that's why you are saying my oc is op but continue reading yo are in for a surprise
1yr
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Fickle_as_light
Fickle_as_lightLv4

this didn't age well

Boring_World:don't worry buddy, you probably haven't read marvel comics, that's why you are saying my oc is op but continue reading yo are in for a surprise
5mth
tedmosby2016
tedmosby2016Lv14

Never does. authors who are quick to call you dumb don't last.

Fickle_as_light:this didn't age well
5mth
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Fickle_as_light
Fickle_as_lightLv4

lol

tedmosby2016:Never does. authors who are quick to call you dumb don't last.
5mth
Other Reviews
Raventan
RaventanLv14

is good but i hope you will not add harem in the story because the harem thing usually make author lost focus it will end up bad somehow....................

1yr

Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Wachdog
WachdogLv4

This story has an interesting beginning, at first I didn't give it much consideration because I thought it was a common fanfic, but I quickly realized that it is underestimated, the plot has character growth and many interactions with well-constructed characters, in addition to the skills of the system and the actions of the mc are very well thought out, of course it has some holes, but I consider them necessary because from my point of view, they are not important and perhaps they will be more recognized in the future, the truth is that this fanfic deserves some 400 chapters because of how good and well created it is

1yr
CruelReality
CruelRealityLv5

Honestly this is mediocre at best. The English is not very good and the protagonist and characters feel like lifeless cutouts. The protagonist in particular has no clear noticeable trait other than incompetence and lack of mental fortitude and thought.

1yr
Tazrune
TazruneLv3

It started good then I became a multiple MC story when he created all of the clones and I just couldn't get myself to continue the story with all the interactions with the Marvel characters through clones

1yr
khazar
khazarLv5

it's a brain dead fanfiction . too much useless details the MC is overpowered yet useless. the story is anywhere but marvel . there is no story development as main marvel universe hasn't gone anywhere it's just world hopping. I tried to be generous rating this.

1yr
SAWOEN
SAWOENLv11

The book is missing alot of details The book is missing world details Everything just jumping from point to point Everything feels rushed But still good overall

1yr
FlammableFire
FlammableFireLv11

The English is broken. The punctuation and grammar is complete garbage. Character and system details are not consistent. The system itself is a hussy as well. --- Basically, it's a train wreck whose only redeeming feature is the ideas behind the story.

1yr
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AvatarLOK2Lv3

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