Item: One Piece:The Lust System
Rating: 3.6

Lv21yr

2024-04-16 07:12

Came with high hopes, seeing a One piece FF with almost perfect score but only found the average OP self insert + power fantasy. The characters feel bland and one-dimensional, the MC's personality is a bit all over the place and the grammar and vocabulary needs an improvement. Still, the writting quality has gone up consistently at chapter 40, so I encourage the Author to keep up the good work! Also, to the guy who's posted 20 5star reviews, pls top. It's misleading and can get the Author in trouble 😭😭😭

One Piece:The Lust System

Yass_Odyssey

4.8

164 Chs

Liked by 22 people

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Sex_God_loverLv2

Good review😏🔥

1yr

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Dark_PersonJJModerator

At this moment i realy like this story, MC Ren isnot a hothead and reckless person, he plans his future actions in detail, He do not wants to be slave of Original Plot and join Straw Hats,but create his own crew and be his own person, He knows in One Piece World only strong and Smart ones can hope to survive in this World, if they want to matter in grand shame of things.

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Demon_Of_LustModerator

Well, first I want to point out MC's background. He was a soldier in his previous life and he is used to fighting and killing.This is a good thing and will save the author many unnecessary events in this regard. Secondly,and the unique thing about this fanfic is MC's target,he wants to return home! I have read many One Piece FF and I have never seen MC have this goal, all authors choose to make their MC not have any family or a good relationship whit them in his previous world.It has always baffled me this matter, of all those incarnated in another world...there is not a single person who wants to return to Mazna?! I always found this unreasonable, and I'm happy because I finally found what I wanted. A message to the author-san:keep your work and never drop it please! I will support you, whether with comments or powers stones. Thank you for reading!

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chocolate_lover44Lv1

Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.

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FinicarLv3

good story,good plot,good grammar,cool MC ,everything is good yeaaaahhhh~

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Decadent0Lv3

It's good now.....................................................................................................................................

1yr

Dark_PersonJJModerator

As my thanks for this story, Sexy Nami Pic.

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rikdo_729Lv3

such a good story~i love it!.............

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