The translation is full of garbage. Talk about ruining my immersion and this fic is up there. Clearly the author couldn't be bothered to check whether things lined up.

hello everyone if you want to read the i suggest you to go to mtl novel and search 'The Rise of Malfoy at Hogwarts' there is complete story to read

things just happen and theres not much personal relationships between characters, theres little to no extra world building and no new or original concepts, it's not terrible per say but I don't think it worth reading for me at least.

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREMWarning for those who don't like harem.The mc is so confused at what he wants to do, half the time he wants to power and influence but then allows Canon events that negatively affect him to still play out.He's an experienced and knowledgeable man with lots of maturity but then some how allows himself to be bullied by girls, give them anything and everything even his own techniques that he created to make himself powerful, they give him nothing and he also goes dumb whenever the story wants to add romance elements.

Thank you for bringing us this story....This story seems very interesting........ The ony problem I see is in the translation....... I hope the author would focus on the names as even some inconsequential names can interrupt the flow of reading and ruin the beautiful experience..........Foe example Guruni should be translated to Ancient Runes.......Please consider it....

So far everything in the story is good and the concept are interesting so the enjoyed the first two chapters and hope to see more of this story

Starting 5 whole chapter doesnt have have a single conversation or character interaction. It was all overview of this happened, that happened, they did this, they feel this etc... Not a single dialogue in all that time, I think thats a very poor way of writing,

A slight bit better than MTL, it seems the "author" ran a grammar tool without any proofreading/editing. The frequency of updates seem to be good though

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It was an interesting concept, but the author is very contradictory in terms of wanting to follow the plot. MC makes changes that should have changed the plot, but the author just gloss over them and follows the plot like a checklist with no reason. Not to mention, the translator skips certain things from the novel, which would have helped in character and world building, which makes people unable to immerse themselves into the novel. AND some tags are simply given to the novel as I specifically came to read a system novel that made me personally VERY DISAPPOINTED!!!