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TeaTop
TeaTopLv1312mth
2023-11-18 23:22

The translation is full of garbage. Talk about ruining my immersion and this fic is up there. Clearly the author couldn't be bothered to check whether things lined up.

Reincarnated as Draco's Twin To Dominate Hogwarts

Scaramousse
3.5
284 Chs

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Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14

Sorry to say translation kinda sucks. The MC's personality leaves a lot to be desired too.

12mth
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Woutt
WouttLv2

I think the translation is fine its not good but its okay, the only thing that annoys me is that MC wants to 'restore' the honor of his family name.

12mth
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Propht
ProphtLv4

I simply came to write this one thing but then I saw your review and I can’t help but wonder why you thought their would be any immersion with a name like Skylor malfoy? I mean it’s a small thing but I just can’t help but be a little upset every time I read a bad name in a fic. Sorry to the author but I mean cmon.

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Clay_Champion
Clay_ChampionLv5

say that after you see the mtl version.

9mth
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Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3

I can bet all my money that the name of the original is something like Xiao Malfoy or something Chinese, but he is the son of Narcisa and Lucius

Clay_Champion:say that after you see the mtl version.
8mth
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Clay_Champion
Clay_ChampionLv5

lmao.Yeah, his name is something evil in Chinese xD "Xie something?" The spells are Chinese as well in them. I dunno what they do in china (referring to movie dubs), i think they rename everything to their cultural counterparts etc.

Salmon_El_Solomon:I can bet all my money that the name of the original is something like Xiao Malfoy or something Chinese, but he is the son of Narcisa and Lucius
8mth
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Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3

No no no, if you read right, all the others names are correct, only the mc is wrong, the mc is the only Xiao Lin in the Malfoy family

Clay_Champion:lmao.Yeah, his name is something evil in Chinese xD "Xie something?" The spells are Chinese as well in them. I dunno what they do in china (referring to movie dubs), i think they rename everything to their cultural counterparts etc.
8mth
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Clay_Champion
Clay_ChampionLv5

🤔 I don't remember much of it now, but sometimes, the mtl called Cho Chang some other Chinese name because of her mysterious Chinese grandfather xD. (If this fic is the one where mc awakens his "Malfoy bloodline related "spiritual heritage", then ya, in it some specific names become inconsistent sometimes. Somewhere around 100+ chapters had his names as evil spirit or Xie something)

Salmon_El_Solomon:No no no, if you read right, all the others names are correct, only the mc is wrong, the mc is the only Xiao Lin in the Malfoy family
8mth
midgetydeath
midgetydeathLv4

That's pretty arrogant and stupid. Though, it's on the head of whoever made that corporate decision. That might be why Chinese HP fanfics treat the shield charm as if it's some sort of form-fitting protective forcefield. I think the direct translation was given as "Iron Armor Charm". Such a mistake would, therefore, be understandable. For someone who never read what it does in the books, forgot, or otherwise didn't bother doing the slightest research on it.

Clay_Champion:lmao.Yeah, his name is something evil in Chinese xD "Xie something?" The spells are Chinese as well in them. I dunno what they do in china (referring to movie dubs), i think they rename everything to their cultural counterparts etc.
7mth
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mw5rya5ndv
mw5rya5ndvLv1

Hehe

Salmon_El_Solomon:I can bet all my money that the name of the original is something like Xiao Malfoy or something Chinese, but he is the son of Narcisa and Lucius
5mth
Primordial_Saiyan
Primordial_SaiyanLv4

There's an author who named his MC Uchiha Bakorio. BAKORIO FFS! It's almost as bad as Bob Uchiha!

Propht:I simply came to write this one thing but then I saw your review and I can’t help but wonder why you thought their would be any immersion with a name like Skylor malfoy? I mean it’s a small thing but I just can’t help but be a little upset every time I read a bad name in a fic. Sorry to the author but I mean cmon.
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Propht
ProphtLv4

It depends because I can totally see this name in yu gi oh

Primordial_Saiyan:There's an author who named his MC Uchiha Bakorio. BAKORIO FFS! It's almost as bad as Bob Uchiha!
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Raja_Sarikonda
Raja_SarikondaLv4

hello everyone if you want to read the i suggest you to go to mtl novel and search 'The Rise of Malfoy at Hogwarts' there is complete story to read

11mth

Thissmithy_Manga
Thissmithy_MangaLv13

things just happen and theres not much personal relationships between characters, theres little to no extra world building and no new or original concepts, it's not terrible per say but I don't think it worth reading for me at least.

12mth
SuohDaoist
SuohDaoistLv13

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREMWarning for those who don't like harem.The mc is so confused at what he wants to do, half the time he wants to power and influence but then allows Canon events that negatively affect him to still play out.He's an experienced and knowledgeable man with lots of maturity but then some how allows himself to be bullied by girls, give them anything and everything even his own techniques that he created to make himself powerful, they give him nothing and he also goes dumb whenever the story wants to add romance elements.

10mth
Najmus_Sakib
Najmus_SakibLv4

Thank you for bringing us this story....This story seems very interesting........ The ony problem I see is in the translation....... I hope the author would focus on the names as even some inconsequential names can interrupt the flow of reading and ruin the beautiful experience..........Foe example Guruni should be translated to Ancient Runes.......Please consider it....

1yr
lolhehe101
lolhehe101Lv4

So far everything in the story is good and the concept are interesting so the enjoyed the first two chapters and hope to see more of this story

1yr
hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

Starting 5 whole chapter doesnt have have a single conversation or character interaction. It was all overview of this happened, that happened, they did this, they feel this etc... Not a single dialogue in all that time, I think thats a very poor way of writing,

11mth
pmoh9
pmoh9Lv6

A slight bit better than MTL, it seems the "author" ran a grammar tool without any proofreading/editing. The frequency of updates seem to be good though

11mth
burntcracker
burntcrackerLv12

Reveal spoiler

2mth
Lewk_Santos
Lewk_SantosLv14

It was an interesting concept, but the author is very contradictory in terms of wanting to follow the plot. MC makes changes that should have changed the plot, but the author just gloss over them and follows the plot like a checklist with no reason. Not to mention, the translator skips certain things from the novel, which would have helped in character and world building, which makes people unable to immerse themselves into the novel. AND some tags are simply given to the novel as I specifically came to read a system novel that made me personally VERY DISAPPOINTED!!!

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