IgnisPrimus

I think you have a typo here. There is no way a Custodian Tribune is in the same league as a Space Marine Captain. Even a Chapter Master would be b*tch slapped by a Custodian Tribune.

Did a trained ogryn not drag a Chimera out of a ditch and twenty yards down a road? I would say they are at least early-c tier if they have decent armor and are just a bit experienced in combat.

Will you use the tomb of Albion in the training arc? if not, will it be in this fic at some point? I think it is the coolest place in Fate that is not a Singularity.

But hey, that's just my opinion.

I gonna be honest the prices are a bit too high, Try to go on Royal-Road and look at the Patreon prices on the stories that are in the top 20 of all time, they only have a 10-dollar price tag for all of the chapters, and the chapters can be anywhere from 20 to 50 with each chapter having 2k words. I don't think it's fair that you compare your prices to people who are putting out slop at the highest price they can because all the other authors have set a precedent of a membership being 10 dollars. And I also think you would get more money overall with all the chapters not being behind a 24-dollar price tag. A lot of fanfic readers don't have that kind of money and would feel discouraged with prices that high and would not even gonna try out your Patreon.

Many thanks!

2 chapters seems a bit much for a side character that is dead. But it would be cool to get a true pov of him with anything spicy he knows.

He is pretty sus.

I have some questions I can't seem to find the answer to on any wiki or YouTube videos. 1 - What are the benefits of having Divinity? I can't seem to find an answer. I know having divinity makes you get stronger easier and having your limit being further away than normal humans. but idk how other than them being less human? 2 - You said with the MC having awakened his Origin he can increase the Mystery around him to the level of The Age of Gods, Does that mean that with his Dragon core, he can have the Mystery around him constantly at that level and have his body absorb the Mystery and finally get to increase his strength to his bodies full potential? And with his Divinity is his potential higher than Artoria's? 3 - And finally, now that Rhongomyniad is unsealed does that mean his divinity is slowly going to increase in the background, or does he have to use it to have his divinity increase?