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Review Detail of GrampZ in Orario Records of Bastard Cheating Minecrafter

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GrampZ
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Sorry for my horrible English, but I hope it's at least readable for whoever reads this future analysis... And well, if you're hoping for a story in which both the protagonist's way of thinking and the world itself are serious and its consequences, unfortunately this story should not be for you. Really, the writing, the world of Danmachi, the central idea is awesome (even if it's an overpowering power) the problem is that it doesn't make sense for him to say he's going to hide this power, and magically the Loki family appears in the Dungeon and he beyond to help them, show MANY of their powers. Like, couldn't you have waited a little and focused on him adapting in Orario, and simply talking to some characters and simple things for the readers to adapt and then ONLY THEN start showing his powers to others? I believe that this initial interaction will ruin all future work, because in addition to everyone knowing his level now, probably as various rumors will be spread, there is no way to have a normal interaction again without it seeming forced (with people he will know). . Anyway, about the aspect of him being the strongest or anything like that, I have no problems because I expected that from the beginning in this story, it just makes me angry how lightly both his powers and the people of Danmachi are taken, or you're going to tell me that in the MIDDLE OF THE LOKI FAMILY CAMP IN THE DUNGEON, he says he's better than everyone, contradicts the captain, beats everyone, makes the monsters in the dungeon look like plastic dolls and is taken as if it were normal (A The way they react initially makes sense, the problem is that soon everyone accepts and then he shows more strength and they open their mouths again, and then they accept). I seriously think that if this work was remade in a more serious way overall and slower it would be much better than it is currently (personal opinion). So far I can understand that I didn't like the aspects above, but is that a reason for me to give a positive review? It depends on your point of view, but honestly I'm more so because of how the girls are liking him so easily (I don't know if there will be a harem, but so far some of the ''main girls'' are already starting to dislike him already) , like Tiona even goes, but Ais? Why make him almost committed to both? If it's just the two of them, you can develop this ''relationship'', but if there is a harem (apparently there will be) it will be another story that will be ruined by the harem. This romance thing will probably limit the story a lot, especially now that it's at the beginning and he's committed to TWO GIRLS... (Is there a way to exchange me with him? ahahah)-----Honestly, this is a real concern-- ---- I hope my ideas weren't confusing, as I'm just typing what I'm thinking and not analyzing much of what I'm saying. Anyway, the story is for those who don't care so much about inconsistencies and accept things lightly (I think I should start doing that too ahahah), unfortunately I'm not like that and I'm giving my opinion and I'm about to share them with you. Thank you for ''listening'' to me so far :)

Orario Records of Bastard Cheating Minecrafter

Vulkizaro_Zoromi

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Varts
VartsLv13Varts

cheers, i should've read your review before I read this. i also stopped early in chapter 4. It felt like written by someone who doesn't really 'interact' with ppl but instead interacts with 'people' on the internet and assumes that's how the world works

Bapabooey
BapabooeyLv15Bapabooey

Very good review, thank you for listing off some of the pros and cons of the novel, you’d be surprised how little people can actually give a decent review.

Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

aa a person who takes small details and things said seriously i 100% agree with all you said

GrampZ
GrampZLv2GrampZ

I only saw today that in the part of ''but is that a reason for me to give a positive review?'' it was actually supposed to be a negative review And about ''I don't know if there will be a harem, but so far some of the ''main girls'' are already starting to dislike him already)'' It was supposed to be liking him - In other words, I typed it wrong and I just came to correct it here, I apologize to anyone who got confused And just saying that I gave it another chance and read it again and in the end I was right in what I said, but I want to highlight my point of view that the relationship would harm the story and that it was the opinion that I had the most doubts about, But from what I read, it really ruined the story in my opinion.

Sachet10
Sachet10Lv13Sachet10

That's why I like MCs who cultivate their powers themselves they know how to value things. Characters like these, who are given everything on a silver plate are the ones who whine about most if not all things.