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HopeBones5
HopeBones5Lv151yr
2023-11-03 17:17

Author has serious mtl issues with both the Max level up of the sharingan going from beginner, 1 tomoe all the way past rinnegan combined with sharingan into kaguya level shenanigans(9 tomaoe) along with the translator not understanding how to use male/female, its just not good and difficult to read.

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RYUSuke
RYUSukeAuthor

I actually wrote this novel in Indonesian language, but some of my readers wanted me to translate it into English,So I used Google Translate to translate this novel into English, so there may be some words that are not clear, but thank you for your input, bro. [My English needs a lot of improvement, I typed this also using Google Translate]

C_K_3132
C_K_3132Lv14

Maybe try using ChatGPT instead of Google translate. It's generally better.

RYUSuke:I actually wrote this novel in Indonesian language, but some of my readers wanted me to translate it into English,So I used Google Translate to translate this novel into English, so there may be some words that are not clear, but thank you for your input, bro. [My English needs a lot of improvement, I typed this also using Google Translate]
C_K_3132
C_K_3132Lv14

Otherwise it's a good read so far. Just hard to read.

RYUSuke:I actually wrote this novel in Indonesian language, but some of my readers wanted me to translate it into English,So I used Google Translate to translate this novel into English, so there may be some words that are not clear, but thank you for your input, bro. [My English needs a lot of improvement, I typed this also using Google Translate]
R0B
R0BLv2

He is right, chatgpt will make a huge improvement

C_K_3132:Otherwise it's a good read so far. Just hard to read.
Refraction25
Refraction25Lv4

I've found Google's Bard is easier to use, you can try that too. it's also less stiff than gpt

RYUSuke:I actually wrote this novel in Indonesian language, but some of my readers wanted me to translate it into English,So I used Google Translate to translate this novel into English, so there may be some words that are not clear, but thank you for your input, bro. [My English needs a lot of improvement, I typed this also using Google Translate]
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