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RYUSuke4 months agoReplied to Joackim_Barnor[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong] thanks bro🥹🥹🥹🙇🙇🙇
- RYUSuke4 months agoReplied to Sationix
Yeah, the author should have included more fights in each chapter.
- RYUSuke4 months agoReplied to araminata
this is a chinese novel. I only translate
- RYUSuke5 months agoCommented
Sadly
- RYUSuke5 months agoReplied to Hypnoticyuna
Right. I'm also very confused here. Because in the original fanfiction material, Torune and Fu should have been killed by Jin in chapter 55. Maybe the author of this fanfiction is sleep deprived.
- RYUSukea year agoCommented
Thank you for the chapter
- RYUSukea year agoCommented
Author, could you please create a dedicated chapter in "volume 0" that explains all the cultivation realms in this novel. And explain the cultivation process in each realm. 🙏
- RYUSukea year agoCommented
This is just a suggestion, but from all the recent chapters, I feel like you're experiencing some difficulty in making the story more engaging. It's like you're thinking: “The MC is the strongest, so what should I do to make the story more interesting?” or “What if people from the future attack?” or “What if someone hurts the people closest to him?” and so on. So my suggestion is: stop focusing on the MC for a while. The reason is that throughout this story, we’ve only seen the MC cultivating and other people's reactions to his ever-growing power. 1. Create side stories that focus on the perspectives of those who met the MC early on and have been with him until now. 2. Write a story about someone who witnesses the MC’s strength and becomes determined to grow stronger like him. 3. Create a story that focuses on people who narrate the beginning of the MC’s cultivation journey (if there’s anyone still alive who knows it). 4. Write a story about a path creator who becomes stronger after witnessing the MC’s power. 5. Tell the story from the viewpoint of someone who sees the MC protecting the universe from an invasion and then passes that tale down through generations—making the MC known as "The Protector" (even if the MC ignores that title). You could also reverse this by showing someone provoking the MC by hurting his loved ones. 6. Write a story about someone searching for the origin of cultivation or the first person to ever cultivate. But only write it halfway—it’ll be more intriguing that way. Then insert a time skip, and have that character meet the MC while he's expanding the universe or breaking through a cultivation realm. That’s all. It’s okay if it doesn’t resonate with you. But by the way, I’ve been following this story since the very early chapters.
- RYUSuke2 years agoPosted
The story is good so read it friends[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
- RYUSuke2 years agoReplied to The_Inmortal_Nya
Yes, everything is the same, even money is the same, the only thing that is different is the place and race. That's what the author said.
