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TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv41yr
2023-11-19 08:44

Complete dissapointment. A dumb MC that ignores metaknowledge and a story that doesn't follow the world rules for its system of magic. He refuses to ask Brom for help and instead learns "Wild Magic" as if that's something you can just do. The stupidity and bad decision making is pretty much constant.

Instead of Arya, I prefer her mom (Eragon)

f0Ri5
4.6
39 Chs

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f0Ri5
f0Ri5Author

you realize the most powerful magical empire to ever have existed used exclusively wild magic, right?

1yr
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Kr0n
Kr0nLv11

wild magic is cannon.

1yr
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Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv4

It's been pretty clear that Brom isn't going to teach him any words and as others have stated, wild magic is canon.

1yr
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TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv4

Wild magic is canon as being super dangerous and needing insane amounts of mental control and magic experience to not immediately blow yourself up.

Kamikaze_Eagle:It's been pretty clear that Brom isn't going to teach him any words and as others have stated, wild magic is canon.
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Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderLv14

author don't listen to this guy your work is 99% better than anything on this platform this is just a jealous trolll

1yr
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imagine being in eragon and not getting dragon and reason being stupid like not liking dragons when its power up like brah ....................................

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f0Ri5
f0Ri5Author

I'll give it a good rating, because if I do, more people might read it. And also, I don't have anything else to say, but I need more words before I can post this. Done, finally.

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demonic_archon
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BlackFun
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There is not much to say since there are only 5 chapters. The Eragon setting is interesting and I like that the focus is on magic.The Mc is bit too stubborn and if it was not for plot he would probably kill himself every other day cause he wants to learn magic without any kind of support. Admirable but probably very stupid cause one mistake with this kind of magic and you are dead...

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Dave_Guest
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Great story so far. I Hope it stays intresting and the author makes the story independent and unique even without following the whole plot.

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Cha0sTheory
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It started strong, but there is so much fanfic protagonist nonsense, that I'm wondering why even bother setting in this particular universe. Could have just made it a stand alone story, idk will read a few more chapters before deciding to continue/drop.

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Prince_Blueblood
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Gud stuff...btw I ship MC and Saphira

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