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demonic_archon
demonic_archonLv41yr
2023-11-13 05:59

this will be mid to me how you gonna have a guy be reincarnated know the ins and outs of the verse has a desire to be powerful yet at the same time rejects a possible boost that will give him that strength what person willingly handicaps themselves like this and I know what happens next is gonna be some bs power ups that probably gonna be a middle finger to any type of power structure in the and this is the only reason I didnt give it a one star I wanna see how you violate the worlds consistency

Instead of Arya, I prefer her mom (Eragon)

f0Ri5
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f0Ri5
f0Ri5Author

A dragon's rider is destined. Even if he wanted to, Saphira wouldn't hatch for him.

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demonic_archon
demonic_archonLv4

as I said possibility not concrete fact

f0Ri5:A dragon's rider is destined. Even if he wanted to, Saphira wouldn't hatch for him.
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TempestDrift
TempestDriftLv5

it still doesn't change the fact that the egg never hatched for anyone except Eragon, even the elf chick got nothing from it.

demonic_archon:as I said possibility not concrete fact
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demonic_archon
demonic_archonLv4

your point do not negate the argument he would have failed but he didnt try and even made up a stupid nigh spiciest reasoning for his excuse to not get a dragon at all which is dumb where in a world the strongest have dragons this is the point your looking at it from a omniscient point of view not a down to earth one

TempestDrift:it still doesn't change the fact that the egg never hatched for anyone except Eragon, even the elf chick got nothing from it.
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TempestDrift
TempestDriftLv5

Yeah the readers like dragons but the MC doesn't, that's his justification and if you've been reading than you'd know that Cedric does no want to be involved in the world's plot/storyline. His goal is to discover more magic and become stonks so he won't need a dragon.

demonic_archon:your point do not negate the argument he would have failed but he didnt try and even made up a stupid nigh spiciest reasoning for his excuse to not get a dragon at all which is dumb where in a world the strongest have dragons this is the point your looking at it from a omniscient point of view not a down to earth one
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demonic_archon
demonic_archonLv4

thats my issue his plan is to discover more magic and become strong dragons are the ultimate horse to ride on that path not to mention his reasoning is nonsensical I dont have to like vegetables but I still eat them to be healthy a picker cant be a chooser and unless your planning to break every conceivable power structure in the verse to make that dream which is as I stated the reason for 3 stars to see how much you abuse the system

TempestDrift:Yeah the readers like dragons but the MC doesn't, that's his justification and if you've been reading than you'd know that Cedric does no want to be involved in the world's plot/storyline. His goal is to discover more magic and become stonks so he won't need a dragon.
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TempestDrift
TempestDriftLv5

This is just author and character bias at this point. The author is trying to write an OC that is flawed and I have a feeling that getting "Saphira" would take away from the characters arc and development compared to a Gary Stu that gets power and convience in chapter 1. Also again he doesn't want to deal with other people whether that would be from the plot but just in general as whole.

demonic_archon:thats my issue his plan is to discover more magic and become strong dragons are the ultimate horse to ride on that path not to mention his reasoning is nonsensical I dont have to like vegetables but I still eat them to be healthy a picker cant be a chooser and unless your planning to break every conceivable power structure in the verse to make that dream which is as I stated the reason for 3 stars to see how much you abuse the system
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demonic_archon
demonic_archonLv4

look my point isnt him getting saphira my point is him wanting power but not trying and making some excuse to not get a dragon thats dumb to me

TempestDrift:This is just author and character bias at this point. The author is trying to write an OC that is flawed and I have a feeling that getting "Saphira" would take away from the characters arc and development compared to a Gary Stu that gets power and convience in chapter 1. Also again he doesn't want to deal with other people whether that would be from the plot but just in general as whole.
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TempestDrift
TempestDriftLv5

Reveal spoiler

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sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3

imagine being in eragon and not getting dragon and reason being stupid like not liking dragons when its power up like brah ....................................

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f0Ri5
f0Ri5Author

I'll give it a good rating, because if I do, more people might read it. And also, I don't have anything else to say, but I need more words before I can post this. Done, finally.

1yr
BlackFun
BlackFunLv14

There is not much to say since there are only 5 chapters. The Eragon setting is interesting and I like that the focus is on magic.The Mc is bit too stubborn and if it was not for plot he would probably kill himself every other day cause he wants to learn magic without any kind of support. Admirable but probably very stupid cause one mistake with this kind of magic and you are dead...

1yr
Dave_Guest
Dave_GuestLv15

Great story so far. I Hope it stays intresting and the author makes the story independent and unique even without following the whole plot.

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TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Cha0sTheory
Cha0sTheoryLv15

It started strong, but there is so much fanfic protagonist nonsense, that I'm wondering why even bother setting in this particular universe. Could have just made it a stand alone story, idk will read a few more chapters before deciding to continue/drop.

1yr
Prince_Blueblood
Prince_BluebloodLv4

Gud stuff...btw I ship MC and Saphira

1yr
Prince_Blueblood
Prince_BluebloodLv4

It's a really good story all things considered.

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