Dropped at chapter 44. The premise is super interesting but the execution is bad. The Authors grammar isn’t great, with constant misspellings, missing words, wrong genders, and incorrect names. There are many repeated paragraphs, and even repeated ending paragraphs at the start of the next chapter. Coins are NOT cheap and padding word count with repeated paragraphs from the last chapter is unacceptable. I read one comment from a reader who pointed out a similarity with another novel they read. After that, you start to see different names being used for the main cast that don’t show up at all before then. This makes me wonder if the Author is copy/pasting from another work and attempting to edit it into their own story. The MC chooses a shield for his main weapon and his stats/abilities limit him a lot. I personally do not like MCs like this, though this is my biased opinion. It’s very clear the MC will not be super OP after training a ton. Honestly, don’t waste your hard bought coins on this unless the Author goes back and fixes everything and keeps it fixed going forward. If they do, it would be a decent read but nothing great.
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