Item: Surviving By Relying On My Yandere Fiancee
Rating: 4.4
Author: 22_2_9592

22_2_9592Lv47mth

2024-04-11 13:25

review at ch 47 The pacing and characters are well written. I do see that this takes on a strong Japanese novel type of writing where the male mc is a oblivious/effortless lady killer while still being timid or cautious. This is still the beginning of the novel, so MC still has a bit of his naive side while the FL is gushing over his everything with rose tinted glasses (including his kindness). He doesn't really support fighting and he doesn't want to kill. I do hope he gets over his kindness or naive mindset. He doesn't want revenge (where I read), but just wants to avoid the main characters despite them despising and trying to tarnish him. In turn, I'm waiting for the MC to grow a backbone to get things done and have some charisma. Good read, but I am frustrated with this character at the moment. If this is what the author had in mind though... it's working.

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