The pacing is too rushed at the beginning but eventually becomes decent later on. I think the author needs to add a few lines to make the interactions a bit more natural sounding than forced. As it is, it kind of feels like the mc says one thing and the people just accepts it without questioning shit. In the later chapters, i seem to be enjoying mcs progression and his potential future powers. Though i wish author properly explored his all element vision. It seems to me, his power is severely limited by his imagination, or rather the lack thereof. Despite its flaws, i wanted to see what happens next but sadly, as of writting this review, the fic has not been updated for 4 months. Will add to library just in case the author resurfaces
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