even though i hate it when the mc reveals that everyone is basically just fictional characters there is still a small chance that the author manages to use this to his advantage, something like giving the novel a sense of realism and telling people that your work is unique ya know but hey i havent started reading yet so who knows if its good or not. ima update my review when i have the time to read the novel and by then we'll see if this decision was really a bad one or not
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LIKEfor those who are up set with the mc revealing his secret identity you can be rest assured that it is only to one.......... Only to two people and those being lumine and paimon, yeah yeah yeah i know what your thinking but please just listen to me for a moment alright this is very important, ok umm now that i have got to this point im actually losing motivation to keep typing so please just bare with this lame explanation for now: one- the mc is not as stupid as you might believe he has his reasons as to why he revealed his supposed deepest secret and "they do" make alot of sense if you think about it instead of just hating like some people out there, two- the interaction between the mc, lumine and paimon after this is what you seriously need to read in order to understand that the whole thing was planned and properly thought off by the author himself "not to say but i quite liked what he did and am happy that i didnt just drop at the first chapter", the best part about the story is not the characters or the progression but the whole game like system in that world, aswell as the additions of some things like the magic system of lumines world that makes use of "the power of stars", basically giving close to omnipotant powers to those who use it.......well if their strong enough to actually use it to that extent though. there are some other aspects of this story i havent mentioned such as the history and laws of lumines world, the interesting mysteries surrounding certain characters there, and the realistic game world interpretation of the author, but hey this is just my opinnion and yours might be different from mine after reading the story (atleast till the 10th and even 20th chapter) but do read the story though im about 75 percent sure you'll like it. Peace
i say 75 as there are a couple of things in the story that'll make you consider dropping, but hey theres no such thing as perfection right and besides this story has great potential, i truly believe that if the author keeps this up and slowly improves sooner or later you'll start liking it too.
Sooner or later you'll start liking it too 💀💀💀💀💀💀 wrf ayo read what you write thats a rapist thought process.
