webnovel
Immortal_Cat
Immortal_CatLv1311mth
2023-12-01 22:37

T/L, I love you, and whatever changes you made, I love it

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
guilherme99gc
guilherme99gcLv14

Translation is good. The story is good, but I can't say whether it's because it borrowed a lot from the original or the author managed to develop many good original parts, I haven't read the original books but from what I know about the games the author borrowed a lot, which is normal since It's a fanfic. I couldn't bear to read here and I went to see an MTL and from what I saw, even with the bad translation of where I read it, it's still good until the end, it's a little slow from the beginning until a little after the middle of the story but it's ok, in the end it's just it gets faster because it seems that the original author lost readers and decided to speed up the end of the novel. There are about 200 to 250 chapters of MC preparing to win the war, which I found dragging, then it's about 150 until the end of it all, this being the war from the first invasion of Cintra until the end in which the MC defeats everyone ("rules the world"), the original author seemed to want to make it longer with the same rhythm as the beginning but when that didn't work he started summarizing things and skipping battles just showing results, the although it was well done. The ending is good, it kind of leaves open but The witcher arc is finished in this novel, it is only shown that the mc can go to other worlds in the end, but Ciri could already do that in the original, it is open only in this part what seems that the author does not intend to continue, but I feel that the novel is over and it ended well, anything else can be put in another novel or something like that. I'm not a fan of many Chinese works as they usually have low quality but this one surprised me a little, but the original material is also good.

Related Stories

Harry Potter: Sex Oriented Hogwarts

“Please, Daddy fuck me. I need you so much!” Lucifer let go of her bum and slid his hand under her hip, going straight for her pussy. Her petals were silken with want, and he nodded, deciding that it was wet enough. “Get on your knees, pet. Suck me hard again.” Hermione backed off his lap and knelt to receive his offering. Tickling and tapping him with her tongue, she worked it back to full strength. His hand sank into her hair, slowly dragging her mouth closer to his pelvis. “That’s my good girl. Are you ready for that dip you’ve been begging for?” Hermione released his cock and looked up at him in a daze. “Did you say dip or dick?” “Dip,” Lucifer repeated, smirking. “But since you’re a good girl, you can have both.” ______________ Synopsis - Lucifer Morningstar, The Devil escapes the Underworld to have a vacation on Earth. But due to some unexpected problems, he would be forced to enroll into Hogwarts, and meet a certain Bushy-haired girl, Hermione Granger. All characters doing sex age is 18+ Lucifer, The Devil is Billions of years old, with Hermione Granger having multiple personalities, her other self's age is 18+ (Hermione - Blessed by Amenadiel, time works differently for her, she has already surpassed age of 18+) __________ Remember do not compare reality to fiction. No copyright infringement intended. All characters rights belong to their owners. Updates - Mon, Wed, Fri, Sun 1 Extra Chapter - 125 Power Stones! ________________ To Read 45+ Advanced Chapters, and support this novel, pls join me on Patreon. Link - patreon.com/SmutDxddy Thank you so much for your Support!

SmutDxddy · Book&Literature
3.7
204 Chs

Douluo: Cutting me drops treasures; Bi Bidong got addicted

New Book "I Sparked a Card Drawing Craze in Soul Land, My Wife Is Funingna" —— After crossing into Soul Land, Lin Yi was gifted a Transcendent Divine Body by the System. However, something went wrong during the fusion! The Divine Body was sealed, and the seal was none other than a shield with a trillion blood points! Only by breaking the shield could he unlock the Divine Body. Out of options, Lin Yi embarked on a path of seeking death, having the powerhouses of Soul Land scratch his shield for him. The System also guaranteed that rewards would be generated based on the amount of health scratched off the shield. As long as rewards were generated, a critical hit would be triggered, providing Lin Yi with an even higher-quality reward! The greater the damage received, the more abundant the rewards! …… Bi Bidong: "Do you really have a death wish?" Lin Yi: "I do, please hit me harder, sister!" Qian Renxue: "OMG, attacking you actually makes treasures drop?!" Lin Yi: "Your damage is too low, only triggering the Purple Grade Pool. Put in more effort and the Black Level Pool, even the Red Level Pool isn't a dream!" Chen Xin: "I refuse to believe I can't break Lin Yi's shield. From now on, I'll kill him twice a day!" Lin Yi: "Pfft, I can't even be bothered to call you out. You're clearly after the Breakthrough Crystals that drop when the shield is broken! Despicable!" …… Please, can everyone stop scraping? I'm in a hurry to break my shield! Online inquiry, who is the strongest in Soul Land? Even if I can't unlock the Divine Body, trigger a Gold Level Pool with damage for me, will you?

This wave has blown up · Book&Literature
Not enough ratings
784 Chs