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Mysteries_Lv111yr
2023-10-23 18:30

the story is good overall, the writing is pleasant, the protagonist is so-so and the system is quite balanced, MC doesn't have to op in 10 chapters, I just wish he didn't have witcher powers like in 99.9% of the stories. fanfics, there are infinite skill options and it has a system but it still looks for witcher skills, other than that the rest is ok

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KirozenLv4

Yeah I agree mage is much better. Or maybe you can like make him have magic of other games

Quake_MidaroLv14

Personally I like it when System fics stay within the Verse they are written in way too many fics out there that mix and match Donutsu some kind of peak talent Magic or Tech Genius etc... that often don't fit within the Verse the story is written in which just feels like a rather poor attempt to make a Isekai OP MC seem interesting when it's not sometime's OP MC's can be enjoyable with mox match powers but it's often rare for a fic to pop up like that one of my personal favorites with a good example is Journey Towards Greatness add's a power system to the fic that's not originally in Verse makes a rather well thought out explanation for the Power and the MC is the only user so far yes he's OP but it's well written sure the first 30-50-ish chapters are rough but it's the kind if rough you can see the greatness behind

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guilherme99gcLv14

Translation is good. The story is good, but I can't say whether it's because it borrowed a lot from the original or the author managed to develop many good original parts, I haven't read the original books but from what I know about the games the author borrowed a lot, which is normal since It's a fanfic. I couldn't bear to read here and I went to see an MTL and from what I saw, even with the bad translation of where I read it, it's still good until the end, it's a little slow from the beginning until a little after the middle of the story but it's ok, in the end it's just it gets faster because it seems that the original author lost readers and decided to speed up the end of the novel. There are about 200 to 250 chapters of MC preparing to win the war, which I found dragging, then it's about 150 until the end of it all, this being the war from the first invasion of Cintra until the end in which the MC defeats everyone ("rules the world"), the original author seemed to want to make it longer with the same rhythm as the beginning but when that didn't work he started summarizing things and skipping battles just showing results, the although it was well done. The ending is good, it kind of leaves open but The witcher arc is finished in this novel, it is only shown that the mc can go to other worlds in the end, but Ciri could already do that in the original, it is open only in this part what seems that the author does not intend to continue, but I feel that the novel is over and it ended well, anything else can be put in another novel or something like that. I'm not a fan of many Chinese works as they usually have low quality but this one surprised me a little, but the original material is also good.

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