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this history is very good , continue it , it has potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This novel has potential. Let's see what it will be like in the future. ...........,.....,.....,.,..............,..............,.................,....................,......................,........................,..................,..................,.............

Till chapter 27 the MC focused on becoming stronger as fast as he could while staying true to his goals and caring only about himself. But from chapter 27 each saga started to drag on for multiple chapters for no reason, each fight was more than several chapters when it could have ended in one chapter and be done with it. And the MC himself, for some reason decided to give his 3 daughters to some dryads idiotically! I mean come on!! The flow of the story is quite good, but the translation is bad, the quality is such that every chapter there are multiple times the translator confuses the pronouns and addresses a male as a "she" and a female as a "he"... Sometimes even going as far as to address a person as a "it"... It's understandable but not good. However despite the bad translation I have still read till chapter 118 in one go since it was so good of a plot. I've enjoyed reading how the MC progressively got stronger using his system, his character growth, the slow Kingdom Building, and in general the story as a whole. So except for the writing quality which will get only one star, I will give this fanfic of five star in everything else.

if you're hesitant after seeing that this is a tl, don't worry. the story doesn't feel like the unsual chinese stories. maybe partly because of the tl's changes.

Translation is good. The story is good, but I can't say whether it's because it borrowed a lot from the original or the author managed to develop many good original parts, I haven't read the original books but from what I know about the games the author borrowed a lot, which is normal since It's a fanfic. I couldn't bear to read here and I went to see an MTL and from what I saw, even with the bad translation of where I read it, it's still good until the end, it's a little slow from the beginning until a little after the middle of the story but it's ok, in the end it's just it gets faster because it seems that the original author lost readers and decided to speed up the end of the novel. There are about 200 to 250 chapters of MC preparing to win the war, which I found dragging, then it's about 150 until the end of it all, this being the war from the first invasion of Cintra until the end in which the MC defeats everyone ("rules the world"), the original author seemed to want to make it longer with the same rhythm as the beginning but when that didn't work he started summarizing things and skipping battles just showing results, the although it was well done. The ending is good, it kind of leaves open but The witcher arc is finished in this novel, it is only shown that the mc can go to other worlds in the end, but Ciri could already do that in the original, it is open only in this part what seems that the author does not intend to continue, but I feel that the novel is over and it ended well, anything else can be put in another novel or something like that. I'm not a fan of many Chinese works as they usually have low quality but this one surprised me a little, but the original material is also good.

Honestly I really do love this story, by far it’s had me on the edge of my seat with every one of the latest chapters and I can’t stop myself from wanting more. If there was a patr30n for this I’d sign up immediately. Keep up the fantastic work Magic Man. A gift from me to you.

El mejor fanfic de the witcher que leido muy buenas historia lastima que vallan pocos capitulos me gusta como vas aumentando de poco a poco la fuerza del mc y como es capaz de aprovecharcel sistema,

Hmmm. Ive read a couple hundred of chs since i found this here in wn, and i just "kinda" finished it so here's my opinion/review on this ff. Great start/ premise and system but it kinda went stale in the end. Not to say it had a horrible end but it lost its identity/ what made it special on the start of the fic. I skipped a few dozen chs in the ending parts and just read the epilogue. There are parts that i felt could've been better but all in all its an average decent fic. Not a masterpiece cause it lost its "style" /flavor towards the end. The book ended like less than a day ago which is quite a surprise.