Till chapter 27 the MC focused on becoming stronger as fast as he could while staying true to his goals and caring only about himself. But from chapter 27 each saga started to drag on for multiple chapters for no reason, each fight was more than several chapters when it could have ended in one chapter and be done with it. And the MC himself, for some reason decided to give his 3 daughters to some dryads idiotically! I mean come on!! The flow of the story is quite good, but the translation is bad, the quality is such that every chapter there are multiple times the translator confuses the pronouns and addresses a male as a "she" and a female as a "he"... Sometimes even going as far as to address a person as a "it"... It's understandable but not good. However despite the bad translation I have still read till chapter 118 in one go since it was so good of a plot. I've enjoyed reading how the MC progressively got stronger using his system, his character growth, the slow Kingdom Building, and in general the story as a whole. So except for the writing quality which will get only one star, I will give this fanfic of five star in everything else.
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