the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story

A fun Star Wars story that more or less squinted at the Yautja part. The kingdom-building tag is the most important one and his system helps him out. It's worth a read. Slight spoiler. My one real criticism would be how out of character the first encounter with the Nightsisters and Jedi was. They seemed to show up just to ask a question and not care at all about what he would be doing. You know, for something the entire universe felt.

10/10. No joke. I don't give that lightly, yet this one deserves it. The fact that something so good, that would be one of the top fanfics even on fanfiction.net or ao3, still isn't even in the top 5 blows my mind. We gotta get this higher.

It's quite good my man, especially for a new writer! But it can get all over the place with him sometimes being too overpowered, then you nerf him by having the system take the overpowered units away. Shouldn't have included them in the first place if that's the case and name-changing on main characters is confusing but other than that good job.

As of Chapter 29.WQ: 2 - Not quite MTL but definitely not good.SD: 3 - Adequate but not good.CD: 1 - Wet Cardboard Boxes is the best way i could describe the characters. The MC is forgettable, The Side Characters are Forgettable, the author appears to try and give everything a light and comedic tone but it's not funny.US: I don't know, i forgot to check, so 5.WB: 3 - Alright, although the timeline is unclear and it appears to be AU.

Reveal spoiler

My friend, this is a kind story. That hooked me up from the beginning, and the MC has excellent development throughout the chapters. The story is neither fast nor slow. I can’t wait to see Jial mastering both sides of the force.

ta indo muito bem continue assim .............................................................................................................................

Reasons why I rated this so low…. 1. It’s a choice system, the main character will never have a original thought throughout the entire novel. 2. On his first choice he literally goes against what he was about to do because of the choices. 3. Also on his first choice it was a summon, you’re 2 chapters in and your already summoning shit from another world. 4. Hes ugly.