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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv101yr
2023-10-23 10:45

A fun Star Wars story that more or less squinted at the Yautja part. The kingdom-building tag is the most important one and his system helps him out. It's worth a read. Slight spoiler. My one real criticism would be how out of character the first encounter with the Nightsisters and Jedi was. They seemed to show up just to ask a question and not care at all about what he would be doing. You know, for something the entire universe felt.

Star Wars: The Yautja

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110 Chs

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