Efe_Kaymak

So much oc's very heavy au, i have not seen a single writer that managed to complete their story without making it a mess. Good luck though... p.s - its too cringe

standart horny simp story, mc is a spineless hormonal teenager chasing girls. Marika as an administrator is simply annoying as hell as well. ************

I'm calling it in this chapter that when the mc reaches the super kage level author will introduce extremely powerful couple of madara level oc's to keep the mc weak. wtf is this yoru %40 of his strength against an elite jounin? I really enjoy this story and i understand the necessity of introducing strong side characters but author please chill

I really liked the story but even as a more powerful minato he did not even killed a single kage level enemy for the sake of the story, so it is frustrating and the author has revealed that the nine tails got extracted from kushina despite everything, minato may seem overpowered but his enemies are stronger as well

There is so much side character focus in this story that there is no main character Aenar is just a side character with aura and the pace of the story is disgusting

Everyone you can read the whole fic from "author today" the writer is Lemor site is russian though use translator to read

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Woah! A fanfiction which conveys power of the friendship just like the og naruto! This is the most extreme nerf of an MC i have ever seen in any fanfiction.

So the protagonist of our story is a side character literally. This is undoubtedly good work but the focus of the story is basically at the hands of his wives. In my opinion narration side tracks mc too much..

Same brother... same...