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2023-12-03 21:39

I actually had this book in my library for the past month or so and now that I've actually read it, I regret shelving it that long.Really good book, love evergthing about it so far. The first few chapters really told me that the author knew what he was doing. Can't wait for new chapters.

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HambinoRanx
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Thanks for giving the book a go, it’s been a long time passion of mine to get this written. I hope you enjoy the ride.

HambinoRanx
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Good evening Heaven, I was wondering if you would like to leave an updated review when you get the chance and let me know what you like or dislike. It will help me craft a better story as I am writing just an FYI you are a top 10 reader of this story currently <3

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