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2023-10-08 05:18

Three chapters in and I'm at the edge of my seat on the expectations of this book, a great writing pattern and solid emotional descriptions entailed in it

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One_Winged_Angel
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Disclaimer: This review will not contain spoilers. Read at your own risk. Huhuhu! Writing Quality: 4.9/5 - Honestly, this is an exceptionally written novel by Hambino. There are next-to-no errors or mistakes, with some personal formatting disagreements (nothing wrong, each author has their own personal formatting flair.) It is easily read and nothing detracts from your reading experience. Stability of Updates: 5/5 - As a fresh novel, this is pretty much a mulligan, typically, but he is pumping out tons of chapters! Daily updates are important and he is taking his schedule seriously. Don't burn yourself out man! Story Development: 4.75/5 - We follow Ty as he stumbles across the supernatural and finds himself caught between a power struggle between the "Good" and "Evil." Vampires, Angels, Demons and Devils, and so much more, but despite that, Mr. Author has done an excellent job at crafting it in his own unique way. Character Design: 5/5 - The characters feel real and their interactions between one another are believable. The cast is growing and each one brings unique thoughts and perceptions that help the story progress naturally and their interactions don't feel forced. World Background: 5/5 - The world is well crafted and thoughtful as it continues to expand. The world seems expansive and I am excited to see the world continue to expand. His descriptive ability is amazing and draws you in. The vivid descriptions create a movie in your mind. Overall Score: 4.9/5 - Honestly, an amazing work and absolutely must read. It's no wonder that it is currently the novel with the most collections in the Oct & Nov 2023 WPC. 100% worth checking it out!

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Okay, so I have just finished reading chapter 250 so far, and I have a bit to catch up to where the Author is, but I feel this is a good spot to at least place my review. I do think the synopsis needs to be updated as it doesn’t really encompass the entire depth of this story, but it does it well enough right now. Over the first 250 chapters, we meet plenty of characters that will make you laugh, cry, and even hate some while you try to figure out their motives and why they are doing what they are doing. The system for this novel is unique and unlike others, and I believe it is being done well here but it will be important to keep an eye on to make sure it doesn’t ever get confusing, so each planet or universe has it’s own innate power system based on the crystals that are placed inside of the planet by whoever is in charge of the said universe it is taking place. At leas that’s what I got from it. So, for example, Earth has a crystal inside controlled by the Angelic race that locks all humans from using any type of magic. When our MC goes to the Demon Realm and goes to his first planet, the Demon King grows the planet to have a crystal that locks people into a certain ability by having them meet a requirement before they can use said ability. So it can be complex and cool, and I have enjoyed reading each planet's setup and uniqueness so far. The story is progressing at a good rate, but when the Author told me this would be over 1,000 chapters, I can believe him more now because there is still so much to explore and discover. But the main plot right now seems to be Ty getting back to the Human realm with unlikely support and unlikely people throwing a wrench at every turn while other events are going on. I think what I like most about the novel is that the cast of characters the author creates still have important events going on while the MC is doing MC stuff, and they matter. For instance, Jade, who I thought would just be the random minor character who’s the GF of our MC is actually a huge part of the story that I’m reading right now and it’s a fun read watching her awaken her power, and I can’t wait to see how it assists Ty later down the road.

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