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One_Winged_Angel
One_Winged_AngelLv151yr
2023-10-15 07:11

Disclaimer: This review will not contain spoilers. Read at your own risk. Huhuhu! Writing Quality: 4.9/5 - Honestly, this is an exceptionally written novel by Hambino. There are next-to-no errors or mistakes, with some personal formatting disagreements (nothing wrong, each author has their own personal formatting flair.) It is easily read and nothing detracts from your reading experience. Stability of Updates: 5/5 - As a fresh novel, this is pretty much a mulligan, typically, but he is pumping out tons of chapters! Daily updates are important and he is taking his schedule seriously. Don't burn yourself out man! Story Development: 4.75/5 - We follow Ty as he stumbles across the supernatural and finds himself caught between a power struggle between the "Good" and "Evil." Vampires, Angels, Demons and Devils, and so much more, but despite that, Mr. Author has done an excellent job at crafting it in his own unique way. Character Design: 5/5 - The characters feel real and their interactions between one another are believable. The cast is growing and each one brings unique thoughts and perceptions that help the story progress naturally and their interactions don't feel forced. World Background: 5/5 - The world is well crafted and thoughtful as it continues to expand. The world seems expansive and I am excited to see the world continue to expand. His descriptive ability is amazing and draws you in. The vivid descriptions create a movie in your mind. Overall Score: 4.9/5 - Honestly, an amazing work and absolutely must read. It's no wonder that it is currently the novel with the most collections in the Oct & Nov 2023 WPC. 100% worth checking it out!

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Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

Is it harem?

HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

No, the story revolves around the MC and his girlfriend. He does reject people that try to make a move on him at later parts in the story though.

Hardy1j:Is it harem?
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

So he stays loyal throughout the story? Nice That's rare on this platform tbh

HambinoRanx:No, the story revolves around the MC and his girlfriend. He does reject people that try to make a move on him at later parts in the story though.
HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Yep, as of chapter 275 loyal as can be. It does help being a skeleton sometimes though but I have a unique twist to put on it, still have about 800 chapters to write though

Hardy1j:So he stays loyal throughout the story? Nice That's rare on this platform tbh
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

If he becomes disloyal after a few hundred chapters because of said twist then what does it matter??

HambinoRanx:Yep, as of chapter 275 loyal as can be. It does help being a skeleton sometimes though but I have a unique twist to put on it, still have about 800 chapters to write though
HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

The twist is unrelated to loyal or disloyal, more of a spin on the skeleton Genre. I can promise he will stay loyal throughout the entire story :)

Hardy1j:If he becomes disloyal after a few hundred chapters because of said twist then what does it matter??
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

That's all I need to know. As a fellow author and reader, I can't deal with harem(over glorified cheating) so I will read your work in a few days, when I get the time

HambinoRanx:The twist is unrelated to loyal or disloyal, more of a spin on the skeleton Genre. I can promise he will stay loyal throughout the entire story :)
HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Yea take all the time you need and I hope you enjoy the story when you get the chance, there will always be new chapters when you come back

Hardy1j:That's all I need to know. As a fellow author and reader, I can't deal with harem(over glorified cheating) so I will read your work in a few days, when I get the time
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

Haha Yea, it only takes a few days to read while months to stack them so I get it

HambinoRanx:Yea take all the time you need and I hope you enjoy the story when you get the chance, there will always be new chapters when you come back
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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Right I have someone on chapter 260 who started reading a few weeks ago asking for more chapters. The speedy readers really be surprising me

Hardy1j:Haha Yea, it only takes a few days to read while months to stack them so I get it
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Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

Reading doesn't take a toll on one as much as writing so it is obvious sigh~~

HambinoRanx:Right I have someone on chapter 260 who started reading a few weeks ago asking for more chapters. The speedy readers really be surprising me
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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Very true, 250 days of writing in a row and people be speed demon readers haha, it’s nice to get feedback quickly as readers catch up though. Hope you’re enjoying the book ❤️

Hardy1j:Reading doesn't take a toll on one as much as writing so it is obvious sigh~~
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

I can understand what you mean but not feel it. No readers that comment actively 🥲. I haven't started your book yet, too busy irl and writing chaps for priv tier. Sigh~😩

HambinoRanx:Very true, 250 days of writing in a row and people be speed demon readers haha, it’s nice to get feedback quickly as readers catch up though. Hope you’re enjoying the book ❤️
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_ZypHer_
_ZypHer_Lv12

What's with the tragedy tag? Sorry for asking but I recently got traumatized by what I had read accidentally..so yeah, I'm quite cautious when it comes to tragedy 😅😂

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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Yea, doing some reviewing and the implications of the tragedy tag, I’ve gone ahead and removed it. It doesn’t fully fit that theme. Thanks for asking

_ZypHer_:What's with the tragedy tag? Sorry for asking but I recently got traumatized by what I had read accidentally..so yeah, I'm quite cautious when it comes to tragedy 😅😂
RoadWolfProduction
RoadWolfProductionLv3

Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏

Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

I even went to have a look but you obviously dropped it or deleted it. 👎

RoadWolfProduction:Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏
cameron_scears_9328
cameron_scears_9328Lv13

i want to read this but curious as to what the powers the mc wields

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Cakewalk
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Okay, so I have just finished reading chapter 250 so far, and I have a bit to catch up to where the Author is, but I feel this is a good spot to at least place my review. I do think the synopsis needs to be updated as it doesn’t really encompass the entire depth of this story, but it does it well enough right now. Over the first 250 chapters, we meet plenty of characters that will make you laugh, cry, and even hate some while you try to figure out their motives and why they are doing what they are doing. The system for this novel is unique and unlike others, and I believe it is being done well here but it will be important to keep an eye on to make sure it doesn’t ever get confusing, so each planet or universe has it’s own innate power system based on the crystals that are placed inside of the planet by whoever is in charge of the said universe it is taking place. At leas that’s what I got from it. So, for example, Earth has a crystal inside controlled by the Angelic race that locks all humans from using any type of magic. When our MC goes to the Demon Realm and goes to his first planet, the Demon King grows the planet to have a crystal that locks people into a certain ability by having them meet a requirement before they can use said ability. So it can be complex and cool, and I have enjoyed reading each planet's setup and uniqueness so far. The story is progressing at a good rate, but when the Author told me this would be over 1,000 chapters, I can believe him more now because there is still so much to explore and discover. But the main plot right now seems to be Ty getting back to the Human realm with unlikely support and unlikely people throwing a wrench at every turn while other events are going on. I think what I like most about the novel is that the cast of characters the author creates still have important events going on while the MC is doing MC stuff, and they matter. For instance, Jade, who I thought would just be the random minor character who’s the GF of our MC is actually a huge part of the story that I’m reading right now and it’s a fun read watching her awaken her power, and I can’t wait to see how it assists Ty later down the road.

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