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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor1yr
2023-10-08 04:23

Thank you for giving my book a read, I won’t go to much into detail but if you have any questions before diving in just let me know!

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Cakewalk
CakewalkLv14

Just finished chapter 10. Will there be Harem? What about a system? How big is Jade to the story?

Ifeanyi_Williams
Ifeanyi_WilliamsLv2

Wow... I read this book. And I'm shocked that its not contracted yet.

HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Thanks, I’m not gonna rush a contract, when it comes it comes. My only goal is delivering an amazing and rich story with good pacing.

Ifeanyi_Williams:Wow... I read this book. And I'm shocked that its not contracted yet.
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

How large is the harem going to be

HambinoRanx:Thanks, I’m not gonna rush a contract, when it comes it comes. My only goal is delivering an amazing and rich story with good pacing.
HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

3-4 max and will only be with strong emotional connections.

Romance_guy:How large is the harem going to be
Ifeanyi_Williams
Ifeanyi_WilliamsLv2

Hehe. Nice. But it seems like a waste of time writing for the satisfaction of others. Don't take my words to heart, it's rare to see a GOOD and FREE story.Thanks man. I'll drop a review soon.

HambinoRanx:Thanks, I’m not gonna rush a contract, when it comes it comes. My only goal is delivering an amazing and rich story with good pacing.
WhySoEvil
WhySoEvilLv3

I see you have been contracted. If you don’t mind me asking, how much have you made so far? My novel recently got contracted and I’d like to get a rough estimate on how much I could potentially be making as a newly contracted author. I understand that all novels are different and there are a million different factors that would lead to more or less revenue, but I can’t really find anything online about how much webnovel authors actually earn.

HambinoRanx:Thanks, I’m not gonna rush a contract, when it comes it comes. My only goal is delivering an amazing and rich story with good pacing.
HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

This is the books first month of being contracted, I will most likely be making MGS ($200) and some extra from my old book. I’d you get a good reader base and set up your priv chapters correctly you’ll make around the above amount when you start out.

WhySoEvil:I see you have been contracted. If you don’t mind me asking, how much have you made so far? My novel recently got contracted and I’d like to get a rough estimate on how much I could potentially be making as a newly contracted author. I understand that all novels are different and there are a million different factors that would lead to more or less revenue, but I can’t really find anything online about how much webnovel authors actually earn.
HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Yea it did take awhile

Ifeanyi_Williams:Wow... I read this book. And I'm shocked that its not contracted yet.
HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Lawful evil. Will do the right thing and kill people if need be. Let me know if you have any other questions 🍺

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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Not really anti hero in that sense more closely aligned with his own goals, Like the universe isn’t revolving around him and he’s just focusing on getting back to earth as things go wrong. If you know a good tag for that il slide it in <3

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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

Sounds awesome man. Enjoy your reading journey and if you eventually find your way to my book I hope you enjoy the ride

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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

That’s fair to be upset on the surface, my approach with the start of this up until he of course died would be shock, A mid 20s adult working terrible shifts is less likely to believe a super natural event is occurring leading to how he acted. And with the fight, flight or freeze response the nervous system has on the body he leaned closer to freezing in the moment. It’s a huge character flaw that stays present for some time because I don’t think he should be a perfect character and that’s a flaw he had to work through. But I do understand this makes a lot of readers upset with his decision making, he can even get cheesy and over defensive of people he feels is important to him because he doesn’t want to lose anyone again and works through those emotions like a normal human would. I do apologize if any of this is polarizing or off putting I’m definitely not the best writer either by any means and learn as I go and make corrections as they are found

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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

You’re right I’ve seen that a lot, I know I’m no Brandon Sanderson, I can only hope to get better with time and feedback like yours helps me out in the future to become better so I do appreciate it

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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxAuthor

The story is on break while I take a break and work on more stories, I will come back to this one day though, no idea when

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One_Winged_Angel
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Disclaimer: This review will not contain spoilers. Read at your own risk. Huhuhu! Writing Quality: 4.9/5 - Honestly, this is an exceptionally written novel by Hambino. There are next-to-no errors or mistakes, with some personal formatting disagreements (nothing wrong, each author has their own personal formatting flair.) It is easily read and nothing detracts from your reading experience. Stability of Updates: 5/5 - As a fresh novel, this is pretty much a mulligan, typically, but he is pumping out tons of chapters! Daily updates are important and he is taking his schedule seriously. Don't burn yourself out man! Story Development: 4.75/5 - We follow Ty as he stumbles across the supernatural and finds himself caught between a power struggle between the "Good" and "Evil." Vampires, Angels, Demons and Devils, and so much more, but despite that, Mr. Author has done an excellent job at crafting it in his own unique way. Character Design: 5/5 - The characters feel real and their interactions between one another are believable. The cast is growing and each one brings unique thoughts and perceptions that help the story progress naturally and their interactions don't feel forced. World Background: 5/5 - The world is well crafted and thoughtful as it continues to expand. The world seems expansive and I am excited to see the world continue to expand. His descriptive ability is amazing and draws you in. The vivid descriptions create a movie in your mind. Overall Score: 4.9/5 - Honestly, an amazing work and absolutely must read. It's no wonder that it is currently the novel with the most collections in the Oct & Nov 2023 WPC. 100% worth checking it out!

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Cakewalk
CakewalkLv14

Okay, so I have just finished reading chapter 250 so far, and I have a bit to catch up to where the Author is, but I feel this is a good spot to at least place my review. I do think the synopsis needs to be updated as it doesn’t really encompass the entire depth of this story, but it does it well enough right now. Over the first 250 chapters, we meet plenty of characters that will make you laugh, cry, and even hate some while you try to figure out their motives and why they are doing what they are doing. The system for this novel is unique and unlike others, and I believe it is being done well here but it will be important to keep an eye on to make sure it doesn’t ever get confusing, so each planet or universe has it’s own innate power system based on the crystals that are placed inside of the planet by whoever is in charge of the said universe it is taking place. At leas that’s what I got from it. So, for example, Earth has a crystal inside controlled by the Angelic race that locks all humans from using any type of magic. When our MC goes to the Demon Realm and goes to his first planet, the Demon King grows the planet to have a crystal that locks people into a certain ability by having them meet a requirement before they can use said ability. So it can be complex and cool, and I have enjoyed reading each planet's setup and uniqueness so far. The story is progressing at a good rate, but when the Author told me this would be over 1,000 chapters, I can believe him more now because there is still so much to explore and discover. But the main plot right now seems to be Ty getting back to the Human realm with unlikely support and unlikely people throwing a wrench at every turn while other events are going on. I think what I like most about the novel is that the cast of characters the author creates still have important events going on while the MC is doing MC stuff, and they matter. For instance, Jade, who I thought would just be the random minor character who’s the GF of our MC is actually a huge part of the story that I’m reading right now and it’s a fun read watching her awaken her power, and I can’t wait to see how it assists Ty later down the road.

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