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LapllaceLv1211mth
2024-02-13 11:47

I found my way here after devouring the author's first novel. Curious to see how Ali is faring post-Shiva's demise, I was pleasantly surprised by what I discovered. Initially, I thought there might be a huge time difference between Earth and Arcadia—like, one Earth year equals ten in Arcadia. But after binging all the free chapters, I was shocked to find out who sent Ali the system. And now I'm left wondering: was it Rio, all powered up and maybe even merged with that red-eyed personality from his head, or was it the guy in chains with the red eyes around Chapter 117? Tough call. The novel's not bad, but with just a few chapters out, it's hard to gauge its full potential. Still, it's heading in a cool direction, and I'm hoping for some epic crossover between this world and Arcadia, or at least a meetup between the main characters. Taking a break from reading for now, but eagerly awaiting more chapters.

Rich Villain of the Ruined World

DevilDarkness
4.0
69 Chs

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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

there will be crossovers later on. I've planned three major events for both mc's and two short appearances of mc's meeting up for a short time. and one big gathering towards the final battles of both novel when both mc's are to face their final bosses.

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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

and there is a time difference between both worlds . for now at the beginning, 1 minute of earth is equals to 10 days of arcadia. as earth's story progresses and earth gets more complicated/mutated this time difference will lessen like 1 hour is 10 days Or 1 hour is a day there like that. . never equal rate tho,, but the difference will lessen depending on earth's mutation. like when it starts to get mana type energies or when different races start to appear or when demons invade or something like that.

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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

well if I can't be shameless and boast about my own book, then what's the point of me being hidden behind a keyboard. so here you go --- this novel is the best novel ever written. I gave it 5* cuz that's the minimum it deserves. this novel is gonna go down in history and your children shall read it for generations to come - so don't you dare ignore this novel and move out. just add this novel in your library and read it. I guarantee on my left kidney that you'll love it. I swear on Noah and kevin's name

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Kagio
KagioLv3

After 25 chapters or so i had to drop this. i dont know how long till he gets to be a real villain but after this long of a prolouge just to know his revenge for kevin i cant read it anymore. the moment where he could have killed him he gets teleported away because of plot and then i thought how often do these things happen? and till now mc didnt have a single win only betrayals, deaths and in the beginning his pathetic life. i mean yeah its ok to have a tranformation from low to high but even after 20 chaps there is nothing. yeah there is the system now but then this whole "oh no something happend and you have to teleport away" happend . i am thinking when author decides to put the chapters behind tickets and how long till kevin dies. i dont want to waste them here when there are better options. for me its ok when the mc prepares or slowly manipulates the heroes so that many chapters are ok to have but this was really one of my most hated tropes where the mc fights his enemes and then either side just runs away successfully because of plot. i mean the beginning and synopsis is where the author catches the reader but i literally had to skip a few chapters SPOILER: after ali confronts kevin in the city and after he gets to know emily so i can know "ahh finally he gets the system" dragging this for so long is really not a win for me maybe having a slower pace is good but not that slow for only L's for the Mc.its really not satisfying to read you know? But then i was like finallyyy he gets his revenge, only for the author to say not for you my man😶 *proceeds to teleport mc away because of plot* so i hope you know how much this triggered me.

11mth
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

1st chapter, and this is already a no-go. The MC is clearly a masochist and a simp. It’s no wonder she chose the protagonist over him, honestly. For the first time in my life, your novel has made me wish for the protagonsit to get cucked. My lord this is garbage. You’ve ruined my mood.

1yr
ryuk9PE
ryuk9PELv4

Have been waiting for this book for centuries and man it is the best till now other than this same author main novel (definitely not because author paid me to say this)

1yr
HeroCultivator
HeroCultivatorLv2

Let's go. I shall start this novel too. just saw your review on pandanovel and here I am. hope it's not poison

1yr
K7RM4
K7RM4Lv13

i expected good things from the author based on the last novel and it didn't disappoint except for the fact that I have not seen near enough funeral chapters as yet but its' still new so I excuse him for that.I would say give it a try you might like it everyone is different and has their own opinions and preferences so give it a try and see if you like it or not.

1yr
DaoisthiEB5M
DaoisthiEB5MLv3

im just dissapoint i get scum .. the backstory is so long

11mth
Tidas
TidasLv5

Bad so bad, back fourth between present is just bad way start a novel and ive never finshed one thats done it. 1 star i cant bloody see the stars to rate properly.

11mth
Lagash
LagashLv1

I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.

1yr
BlondStrawberry
BlondStrawberryLv14

5 star WQ 5 star US 1 stars for the rest. You stretched the story way too thin for personallity settings. Then took a nosedive into the abyss for world setting I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.

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