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2023-10-08 15:20

i expected good things from the author based on the last novel and it didn't disappoint except for the fact that I have not seen near enough funeral chapters as yet but its' still new so I excuse him for that.I would say give it a try you might like it everyone is different and has their own opinions and preferences so give it a try and see if you like it or not.

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DevilDarkness
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nice. 🫂👍🥲

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Kagio
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After 25 chapters or so i had to drop this. i dont know how long till he gets to be a real villain but after this long of a prolouge just to know his revenge for kevin i cant read it anymore. the moment where he could have killed him he gets teleported away because of plot and then i thought how often do these things happen? and till now mc didnt have a single win only betrayals, deaths and in the beginning his pathetic life. i mean yeah its ok to have a tranformation from low to high but even after 20 chaps there is nothing. yeah there is the system now but then this whole "oh no something happend and you have to teleport away" happend . i am thinking when author decides to put the chapters behind tickets and how long till kevin dies. i dont want to waste them here when there are better options. for me its ok when the mc prepares or slowly manipulates the heroes so that many chapters are ok to have but this was really one of my most hated tropes where the mc fights his enemes and then either side just runs away successfully because of plot. i mean the beginning and synopsis is where the author catches the reader but i literally had to skip a few chapters SPOILER: after ali confronts kevin in the city and after he gets to know emily so i can know "ahh finally he gets the system" dragging this for so long is really not a win for me maybe having a slower pace is good but not that slow for only L's for the Mc.its really not satisfying to read you know? But then i was like finallyyy he gets his revenge, only for the author to say not for you my man😶 *proceeds to teleport mc away because of plot* so i hope you know how much this triggered me.

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