Item: Supernatural: heaven change of fate
Rating: 2
Author: Mastarius

MastariusLv21yr

2023-11-22 10:19

too boring, main reason is the mc, all he does is "make sure everything goes same as canon"

Supernatural: heaven change of fate

Nonstop_Hamilton85

4.0

93 Chs

Liked by 11 people

Replies7

Nonstop_Hamilton85Author

then what would you like for it to be different

1yr

PsyLoRDLv5

not following canon is a good start. no one wants to re-read/re-watch (you get it) Supernatural with an extra character...

Nonstop_Hamilton85:then what would you like for it to be different

1yr

Nonstop_Hamilton85Author

give an example, what exactly do you want the Mc to do? explore different worlds?

PsyLoRD:not following canon is a good start. no one wants to re-read/re-watch (you get it) Supernatural with an extra character...

1yr

Alberto1234Lv1

Podria ir a otros mundos sobrenaturales con teen wolf o the vampire diaries mundos asi tipo sobrenaturales o nose :)

Nonstop_Hamilton85:give an example, what exactly do you want the Mc to do? explore different worlds?

1yr

Wolf_Savage_9952Lv4

yep that's is sadly true

1yr

UnKnownEntity001Lv14

There’s not even a point of writing a fanfic if literally everything stays the same. Have some imagination, change the story how you would want to see it change. Keeping exactly to cannon with little to no change defeats the purpose of it being a fanfiction.

Nonstop_Hamilton85:then what would you like for it to be different

1yr

RegalObscureLv4

Thank you poison tester.

1yr

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Daoist6Dg0HkLv1

Muito bom fassa mais cap ele viajando em outros mundos tipo game off trones, hay Potter , Crepúsculo. você também pôde botar ele pra viajar nos mundos dos animes etc.

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Wolf_Savage_9952Lv4

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