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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv141yr
2023-10-26 02:42

Big fan of supernatural. I like the plot and development but it needs work. run-on sentences and confusing dialogue due to a lack of punctuation. Overall all decent story.

Supernatural: heaven change of fate

Nonstop_Hamilton85
4.0
93 Chs

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Kazuki190
Kazuki190Lv4

there potential nice all nice nothing to say more all in the stars overall good recommended to read

1yr

Mastarius
MastariusLv2

too boring, main reason is the mc, all he does is "make sure everything goes same as canon"

1yr
neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5

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1yr
Daoist6Dg0Hk
Daoist6Dg0HkLv1

Muito bom faça o protagonista conhece outros mundos tipo de uma realidade diferente outra dimensão você entende autor eu acho que o público não liga muito se as coisas fassão tanto sentido exemplo o guê eu quero dizer é que guando você ficar sem ideias no mundo de sobrenatural é porquê não têm mais nada pra você escreve do mundo de sobrenatural agora você pode siplemente botar nosso protagonista anjo em outros mundo diferentes tipo , games of trones, senhor dos anéis crepúsculo, hayy Potter, tee worf. Ou você pode botar nosso anjo pra viajar pro mundo dos animes eu mesmo vejo qualquer um que você escolhe.

8mth
Daoist6Dg0Hk
Daoist6Dg0HkLv1

Muito bom fassa mais cap ele viajando em outros mundos tipo game off trones, hay Potter , Crepúsculo. você também pôde botar ele pra viajar nos mundos dos animes etc.

8mth
Wolf_Savage_9952
Wolf_Savage_9952Lv4

the book is good and nice but I have one problem with the author, why make the MC always lose, I mean yes some times the MC but he never truly wins major fights never finishing his enemies, the always get away it seems as if the Author want that the changes the MC makes in the original story should remain minimal to nought MC and this is seriously frustrating and where is the MC power level mean he struggles in fights the he is supposed to win easily

12mth
Ethereal062
Ethereal062Lv14

Really glad to have a good supernatural ff.

1yr
Xander_Paz
Xander_PazLv4

I tried to give it a chance, but there are so many problems that I might as well give up. I say it's okay to try but I think you only asked an AI to write the story for you and you didn't edit it, I don't know if that was the case but if so it's better to clarify it and read with that mentality

8mth
Playtinker_game
Playtinker_gameLv1

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Sonson54
Sonson54Lv4

I don’t even have to say nothing it’s just that good

1yr
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