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Do not come into this story expecting it be realistic as the author claims. Time has no meaning in this story. Within a single year the mc has managed to bring about the Industrial Revolution. Even with memories from his past life, this is impossible. It would take a decade at least. However, within a single year the mc has introduced, steam engines, trains, bank, stocks and stock market, late 19th/early 20th century firearms and artillery and machine guns, steel ships. All of these things have been not just introduced but refined and perfected within a single year. Just getting the steam engine built properly and his factories installed with them should have taken a year to accomplish. This is a story where you turn off your brain while reading. Do not expect any kind of realistic kingdom building. There are alt history novels on this sight that are far more realistic. However, this story is still slightly enjoyable. Not much is known about the world, and the characters don’t really have any unique personalities, but it’s still early on. My biggest advice to the author: remove your own review where you say this story is a more realistic kingdom builder then other stories on this site. It most definitely is not. Good luck with your novel.

So you expect to have entire fleets of ships in only a year???? Author are you a teenager by chance? You seem to have no realistic idea of how time moves. That not an insult. This story just get worse with each chapter.

“Realistic” lmao it’s not realistic at all.

Each chapter gets less realistic.

The biggest issue I’ve found with this story is time. Time means nothing so far in this story. Any one of these ideas should take years to implement, yet in just over a year he’s pretty much started the Industrial Revolution. It’s so unrealistic. Look at other alt history type stories, things take years if not decades to become a reality. Yet in this story it all just magically works out. No issues or anything. Author don’t be afraid of using larger time skips, it will make your story feel more real. All of these ideas should’ve taken at least 5 years to implement, and that’s with everything going perfectly. Realistically it should’ve taken a decade, and that is accounting for the mc having his memories from his past life. Also remember this is a medieval society, to much change to fast causes blowback. Even if those changes are for the better.

A few hundred chapters is a lot for an academy arc. Would definitely add the tag. I’ll prob try reading it again sometime, I just despise school yard type drama.

It seems like it could be interesting however for me personally it’s ruined by the school drama. The story isn’t tagged to show that a large portion of it is going to involve an academy arch. Of course in the very first chapter at the school, the childish drama begins. I might come back to this story in the future since I enjoyed the authors legion story, however it’s just not an enjoyable read to me rn. Please tag your story correctly author. There is an academy tag for a reason.

Yep already the school year drama is starting. Sigh there goes my hopes for this story. Please properly tag your story next time author. Loved your legion story but I doubt I’ll continue reading this. Have no interest in childish drama.

You need to add the academy tag to the story. To find out a good portion of the story is going to involve “school life” when it wasn’t tagged in the story, makes me hesitant to continue reading. I have little interest in reading about school yard drama that almost always comes into a story when there is a school arch.

Just noticed WN is 4 chapter behind RR for this story.