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NouflexAuthor1yr
2023-10-02 04:15

EEEEY! I think you've gotten used to it by now, like always your shameless and lazy author review. Hope you enjoy the book!

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Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Didn't you drop this novel previously? What happened are you going to write a new one now? Also when will uou update overlord fanfic?

NouflexAuthor

yeah it going to be a better version, znd hopefully complete

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Didn't you drop this novel previously? What happened are you going to write a new one now? Also when will uou update overlord fanfic?
NouflexAuthor

as for overlord, I just updated it now

Sabaroth_zarkiel:Didn't you drop this novel previously? What happened are you going to write a new one now? Also when will uou update overlord fanfic?
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

I really liked the previous version since this is harem I recommend not adding elven princess in the harem since I heard those elves have tradition of not having a harem and maybe you could keep her for aurther, also please add the other girls like the one with black hair and horns and the other one who looks like a beautiful demon girl🙏 sorry I forgot there names 😅

Nouflex:yeah it going to be a better version, znd hopefully complete
NouflexAuthor

im not addind tess in the harem dw

Sabaroth_zarkiel:I really liked the previous version since this is harem I recommend not adding elven princess in the harem since I heard those elves have tradition of not having a harem and maybe you could keep her for aurther, also please add the other girls like the one with black hair and horns and the other one who looks like a beautiful demon girl🙏 sorry I forgot there names 😅
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

I see good

Nouflex:im not addind tess in the harem dw
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

When will you next update the overlord fanfic?

Nouflex:im not addind tess in the harem dw
LeleyRLQLv1

Autor, atualize com mais frequência, POR FAVOR!!!🥺🥺🥺🥺

NouflexAuthor

its hard bro, im working on two books at the same time I cant do it

LeleyRLQ:Autor, atualize com mais frequência, POR FAVOR!!!🥺🥺🥺🥺
LeleyRLQLv1

Tudo bem, autor. Espero que venha pelo menos uns 3 ou 4 capítulos por semana pra alegrar seus fãs, tamo junto brother!💪🏻🙏🏻

Nouflex:its hard bro, im working on two books at the same time I cant do it
NouflexAuthor

thanks bro, means a lot for me❤️🔥

LeleyRLQ:Tudo bem, autor. Espero que venha pelo menos uns 3 ou 4 capítulos por semana pra alegrar seus fãs, tamo junto brother!💪🏻🙏🏻
Ghost_knight2_2Lv4

I'm just here to question you if you will add the princess 🫠

NouflexAuthor

in the harem? no

Ghost_knight2_2:I'm just here to question you if you will add the princess 🫠
Ghost_knight2_2Lv4

🥲

Nouflex:in the harem? no
NouflexAuthor

sorry bro

Ghost_knight2_2:🥲
Zzz_808Lv3

Oh even though the daughter and mother are beautiful , so which one do you add? Maybe it's character

Nouflex:in the harem? no
Joao_Pedro_5293Lv13

who is in the harém?

BigDadChadLv3

Will Kathyln Glayder be tho?

Nouflex:in the harem? no
NouflexAuthor

nah

BigDadChad:Will Kathyln Glayder be tho?
Jonathan4starLv14

How big harem

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