Hello there, Shameless Author here to give myself a 5 star review until enough normal people review the novel that I no longer need this review.

😩 I am at chapter 10 story based it's good but so many unwise and unnecessary info dump from characters. Why would someone who the MC just met share so much info to the MC they even almost accidentally revealed their identity. For someone who is a beyonder and belongs to a secret organization like Twilight Hermit Order that's so unprofessional a doubt even a half mad and insane character who does such a thing unless influenced by supernatural powers.

Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out but need more depth and I'm sure they'll get more in the future as the story progresses. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!

Honestly, it's good. Things might be a little confusing at the start but I would say it's a solid read since those confusions clear up eventually. [img=recommend]

Kakakakaka this was something I was loog for thank you author kun keep up the good work!!

It's just two chaps so I can't give a worldwide big review but I try. As anyone may already know, I mainly love Vamp novels but this is an interesting concept that I never heard of. Anyway, the words flow smoothly, some funny sequences are there too (if you imagine Max grinning without any teeth :D...) and the story sounds interesting. Manipulation is one of my most favorite toxic and dark "abilities" so thumbs up for that. 4 stars cuz I don't have enough info but let me know when you have at least ten chaps and I look at it again. For now, peace~

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First of all, this review is written through a translator. The story written is generally good, but in my opinion there are a few points that are missing. For example, the romantic subplot or a bigger problem is the rituals that seem very forced. Yes, the rituals seem very forced and even make me very nervous while reading them. What, it's not even sequence 7 yet, sequence 5 wants you to mess with someone. This is complete nonsense. If he was going to attempt this kind of thing, at least the main character should have been rank 5. Also, the series should have started at least 4 years before the main events started. If you have studied the queues in the LOTM universe, you will notice that they all follow a certain route. There is no need to perform rituals, with the exception of between 9-5, because you are still human. Between 4-0 you have to perform the ritual because your journey from humanity to divinity begins. (The path of the klein is abnormal. It requires a ritual at rank 6. Likewise, it requires an anchor at rank 4.) I hope you will think about this story in more detail, polish all the rough parts and rewrite it. Then I'm sure you'll create a great work.

Definitely worth of your time, very recommended for those who like MC struggle against the world