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FollMystery
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2023-09-23 07:23

I honestly don't know why I was surprised by a nervous protagonist, it's a multiverse story with a villainous protagonist, it couldn't be any different and I can't complain because the author was intelligent, he wrote this obviously for the large nervous web novel audience in a phenomenal way no meme, the story is written in such a way to enhance the MC that Zack Snyder would cry with emotion, one more thing confused me the author is intelligent he aimed at his target audience from the beginning so why do three chapters in a row basically without the MC ? Obviously the audience would hate these chapters, so why? (For the fanboys who come to comment, I have a gun, be careful.)

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Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

how much free time... go wash some dishes.

FollMystery
FollMysteryLv1

Someone felt offended😱

Thiago_guedes:how much free time... go wash some dishes.
Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

FollMystery:Someone felt offended😱
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FollMystery
FollMysteryLv1

I specifically ask fanboys not to comment and what do I get? a fanboy who feels more mature telling others to wash the dishes because he can't argue other than calling others stupid for having a different opinion than him anyway, this just proves that my criticism of the target audience of this novel is right, so thank you.

Thiago_guedes:
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Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

FollMystery:I specifically ask fanboys not to comment and what do I get? a fanboy who feels more mature telling others to wash the dishes because he can't argue other than calling others stupid for having a different opinion than him anyway, this just proves that my criticism of the target audience of this novel is right, so thank you.
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Sukuna_glazer67
Sukuna_glazer67Lv4

Thiago_guedes:
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jil_jung_juk
jil_jung_jukLv4

this is Chinese mtl

FollMystery
FollMysteryLv1

serious?! So the good things I said are useless... the guy could put this information in the Synopsis.

jil_jung_juk:this is Chinese mtl
Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

I mean, the fact he didn't put that in the synopsis kinda proves that he is smart enough to trick you into not only reading it, but reviewing it too.

FollMystery:serious?! So the good things I said are useless... the guy could put this information in the Synopsis.
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Jarusauskas
JarusauskasLv1

Friend, when you talk, you risk having me explain the gun, it's unnecessary, we all have different ideas and we have to accept it.

Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

(for new readers out there who rely on the comments for judging whether a novel is good or not, please read it first before deciding to skip, theres a guy named FollMystery and hes spreading fake information about the novel dont believe him this guys account is fake) / for that guy: dude you're reading time is literally NOTHING, what you said was the mc ACTING okay did you even read the chapter or what, also if you red just ONE MORE chapter then you would understand that what you're saying is basically ALL BULL, dude i really don't want to WASTE my time commenting any further on haters like you but i just can't stand the likes of your KIND (worst than haters are fakes) ruining this amazing novel and DETERRING new readers from enjoying themselves. why did you stop SPECIFICALLY on chapter 3 huh, your clearly a fake?!

FollMystery
FollMysteryLv1

Wow, calm down, it's not because someone has a different opinion than yours that the world is going to end, but yes, I read an entire chapter, in fact I read nineteen before writing this review, as absurd as it may seem to you, this is really my opinion about the book. As for the fact that I only wrote the MC's action, I didn't want to give too much of a spoiler in my review and also because to me it seemed like two thirds of the writing was just to magnify the MC by saying how divine his actions were, I actually they reminded me of many epic scenes from Zack Snyder, but to the extreme so much so that I included it in the review. And where am I spreading false information about the novel? literally, I wrote a review four months ago and that's it...

Ireallylikereading:(for new readers out there who rely on the comments for judging whether a novel is good or not, please read it first before deciding to skip, theres a guy named FollMystery and hes spreading fake information about the novel dont believe him this guys account is fake) / for that guy: dude you're reading time is literally NOTHING, what you said was the mc ACTING okay did you even read the chapter or what, also if you red just ONE MORE chapter then you would understand that what you're saying is basically ALL BULL, dude i really don't want to WASTE my time commenting any further on haters like you but i just can't stand the likes of your KIND (worst than haters are fakes) ruining this amazing novel and DETERRING new readers from enjoying themselves. why did you stop SPECIFICALLY on chapter 3 huh, your clearly a fake?!
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FollMystery
FollMysteryLv1

I decided to check my notifications now and man, you're not a fanboy, fanboys don't accept different opinions, I more than accept you saying why you liked the book and for not threatening my family, calling me a hater or saying that I'm fake, I would give your comment a UP, look at this last guy who commented is an example of a true fanboy.

Jarusauskas:Friend, when you talk, you risk having me explain the gun, it's unnecessary, we all have different ideas and we have to accept it.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

oh

FollMystery:Wow, calm down, it's not because someone has a different opinion than yours that the world is going to end, but yes, I read an entire chapter, in fact I read nineteen before writing this review, as absurd as it may seem to you, this is really my opinion about the book. As for the fact that I only wrote the MC's action, I didn't want to give too much of a spoiler in my review and also because to me it seemed like two thirds of the writing was just to magnify the MC by saying how divine his actions were, I actually they reminded me of many epic scenes from Zack Snyder, but to the extreme so much so that I included it in the review. And where am I spreading false information about the novel? literally, I wrote a review four months ago and that's it...
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Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

the mc is not a nervous protagonist, that one line is all the time i am willing to spend in this.

FollMystery:Wow, calm down, it's not because someone has a different opinion than yours that the world is going to end, but yes, I read an entire chapter, in fact I read nineteen before writing this review, as absurd as it may seem to you, this is really my opinion about the book. As for the fact that I only wrote the MC's action, I didn't want to give too much of a spoiler in my review and also because to me it seemed like two thirds of the writing was just to magnify the MC by saying how divine his actions were, I actually they reminded me of many epic scenes from Zack Snyder, but to the extreme so much so that I included it in the review. And where am I spreading false information about the novel? literally, I wrote a review four months ago and that's it...
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FollMystery
FollMysteryLv1

Ireallylikereading:the mc is not a nervous protagonist, that one line is all the time i am willing to spend in this.
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Pandora_7219
Pandora_7219Lv11

Yeah not a big fan of this story either dont know what the nervous protagnist your talking about tho

Supreme_Chaos_Will
Supreme_Chaos_WillLv4

Will theoretical it isnt a villainous mc, unless you put in contrast with Super heroes and villain world settings. It somewhat simila to DC: Kryptonial Emperor.

DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Will this novel be slow pace to the end or it will catch speed in later chapters?

Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1

Thiago_guedes:how much free time... go wash some dishes.
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