Zenos_Maxima2611

This novel is actually good. It's just that the presence of "death" here really bothers me, it's like you're adding something unnecessary to your own cooking. it's good, it tastes good, but something isn't quite right there.

Touch the grass, my friend. And you yourself are probably just a high school kid or an unemployed person who never leaves the house, responding to other people's comments with insults lol.

English is not your first language? Maybe this is understandable, especially for translating your novel to English. But I suggest, if you do use AI as a translation engine, I suggest adding some commands like making it more natural and flowing, or fixing verbs, sentences and so on.

Honestly? I don't like MC. Ambitious, but naive and idiotic at the same time, typical of most Chinese novel MCs that I know. Angry because a big club in the Premier League refused a friendly match? Man, if I were the president or owner of a club in the top tier of the English Premier League, I would definitely refuse. I would even choose to have a friendly match with another big European club that is on par.

I don't know if MC is an idiot or naive... of course, no premier league club would be interested in a friendly match with an English league three club. If I were the owner of a premier league club, I would also have the same view, even though the league three club has talented young players. I'd rather have a friendly match with another European club, which is on par.

Bro, as an Indonesian, I hope u change or modify the first chapter when MC got Reincarnated to ROTK, it's horrible for me to read that. MC so happy when he died and reincarnated to ROTK, when he have good family? Wtf with you?.

Webby Fanboy now :

4'8 feet? It's too short, I think?

I feel like this was made by AI, don't know why?

Both I think.