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2024-04-10 13:41

Because of the author the book became a boring waste of time. First 40 to 50 chapter the story was excellent later it became a complete waste as there is zero progress in story lot side characters are introduced and side characters play more imortant role in most of chapters than main characters. Author no one cares about side characters or their plots who will take a back stage once the story arc is finished. So stope wasting readers time. If you want to write a 5000 chapter novel it is OK but there should be a proper story to write.

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Thank you for the review. I'd like to clarify a few points: First, there are 20 chapters remaining until the novel concludes. Second, regarding characters like Eileen, 86, or The Nun—this might be a minor spoiler, but they are not merely side characters. It was no coincidence that Eileen discovered Renji, nor was it an accident that she repaired 86. The reasons behind these actions will be revealed in the "Succubus's Greatest Victory" arc. Third, to prevent the past memories or what might seem like filler from becoming tedious, I've introduced an event in the "Zero's Dream" arc. This event is designed to showcase all past memories, explain how they were contracted, and provide the backstory for every main character.

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