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JumpsFromCliff
JumpsFromCliffLv131yr
2024-01-03 22:29

Honest review after my free day of reading this novel. I don’t like the MC nor do I hate him. He exploits woman around him while feeling good reaching his goals like that. He is like a Mordern woman & not a simp. I had good laughs but I can’t handle the guys around him, it’s like he is the only real male on that plane while others just do as he says without knowing who or how strong he is…. You can’t deny that he would be a cuckhold or dead if out Author wasn’t this delusional like woman these days I hope you write a new one and improve in that part !

Fallen Chronicles

Hail_The_loli
4.6
422 Chs

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Hail_The_loli
Hail_The_loliAuthor

Thanks for reviewing. His personality will improve over time, as he was just a normal person from Earth. It's hard to act all-mighty when you are not as powerful as you once were, but I did improve his personality in Nova's arc. Additionally, 'Mystic Journey' will feature the MC you described, but sadly, it is still in the rewriting process.

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mystery_anonymous
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read the new novel "The end of world has not yet begun, the system is activated in advance"

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