Vwarrior

Every chapter is about the MC great bloodline. we get it author no need to make MC a narcissistic masochist. he already have three wives and he could have more than a dozen children with them and i dont understand why he wants to bereak relationship with them if they are loving him. and every other character in novel is too shallow with no personality at all. the only reason for their existence if for mocking MC and getting trashed by him.

And the MC is impotent (Not sexualy but emotionaly) wow what a twist. He somehow ends in a relationship with a woman and due to some circumstances had to live a mortal life with her for three years and later just couldn't understand his feelings for her and says "Destined to Meet but not to be together." wow what a bullshit I can understand if he had feelings for some other woman but no all he care about is his clan. And most of the novel is about clan building only nothing else. Zero character growth for MC and any people around him all care about only clan. Come on translator if you are reading this comment inform the author if he has some kind of fetish of clan building then keep it in his mind but if he write a novel he need to adhere to his ordinary readers also who don't have something lose in their brains. How can a MC don't have any feelings other than clan building.

one of the bad novels i read because it has one of the worst useful useless golden finger artifacts and the MC thinks that it is some kind of heaven defying treasure. it has zero usefulness. it would been better if author did not even included the artifact in the novel.

Do we need to know the boys parents thoughts on their opinion om their kid travelling with Yuvan. And does these parents have any relevance after this chapter? so this called a filler and it is just waste of time.

it will never end just like the Mech touch. as MLB will fill all the chapters with filler and characters who we will never meet again in future and also never care about.

Author you are you writing a book to put your readers to sleep. As it is getting boring and boring as chapter goes on. if i start reading this book after 5 chapters i need to take a break because i start feeling sleepy. You are just dragging on the story to Increase the chapter count this is bad author couple of months back i started to feel that story is picking on so I purchased privilege chapters for this month but for what nothing had happened from chapter 400 to 417.

MLB is just increasing the chapter count. this chapter is just a filler

joke of century my little brother releasing 3 chapters a day and if you are gullible enough to trust him that is biggest sin. I who was following MLB from duel cultivation onwards let me say you one thing never trust MLB

The title of this novel should not be clan raise: starting as a grandfather it should be named military raise: raise in military ranks in most corrupted dynasty under most incompetent emperor of all time. This story started good but as the novel is going on we get to understand how usless the author thinking is. Even present day Chaina does not have this much corruption. let me say you what is happening in this story first MC becomes Military officer as a female military officer thinks that he can train the soliders and recruit him. then he Trains the soilsers how we don't know he on earth is not from military background but an graduate. he trains them in such a way that they become elite among elite and there is an invasion he protects the military supplies and only his team will be able to protect military supplies and he gets promoted. Next he needs to train a new batch of soliders then again there was an invasion and he attacks them with some less than 500 groups he defeats more than 1000 troops of enemy. Next again he gets promoted again he needs to travel to a different location and needs to train the troups here there is some additional plot story that is someone is betraying the dynasty and supporting the enemy. for this there is some story back and forth and finally MC catches the culprits then later this time there is an invasion planed by the dynasty on the invaders. so MC leads his newly trained elite 1000 soilders and invade the enemy tertory. Here the enemies are barbarians and mostly live in clans. Next in battle he kills more than 10,000 enemy troups (Massacre more than 8 clans) and he gets the name as god of slaughter then next he meets with his superiors and kills a large clan which has more than 20000 troops his superiors are useless if he did not reached in time they would be killed but still he will not get recognition. then he meets with the female general whom I mentioned before then attack the enemy capital city and he kills the king and they win the battle this will result in the empire extension and due to this emperor recognizes him and gives him a small promotion and makes he move to a different location here again he needs to start training a new batch of troops. so the story is all about get promotion in military and training new troops and facing corrupt officers and deal with them and why I said incompetent emperor because don't you see every where MC goes he needs to train a new batch of soliders every where so why is that the emperor sorounded himself with corrupt officials from top to bottom in such a way that if MC does not get involved the empire would have been dilefeated by barbarians and several other internal and external enmies. Is this how a emperor should run an empire this now is so dumb it does not make any sense. if you want to read a dumb book with a lot of nonsense and stupid stuff this book is for you. But if you want to read a book with a bit of sense then this book is not for you.

don't trust this author My Little Brother he will never ever post 93 chapters in a month that is just fake to attract more gullible reader to spend more on privilege chapters. if he atleast post 50 chapters in a month that I'd great but he never does that. As he expect us to buy pay for privilege chapters which we already own. so don't waste your money. He is one author that I will never trust on this site as he dropped more books that some authors entire catalog of their books. one of his latest book he dropped at 12 chapters. I never going to read any other book from this author in my life. I am just continuing with this book as I am a long term fan of this book and once this book is done I am done with this fake author.