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JustABreeze
JustABreezeLv145mth
2024-06-29 13:28

Local reader since around the beginning here, making this review with this having ended... around a month after it did. I was waiting for information on potential side stories, but for now I'll leave this here; if there's side stories I'll come back to this. Anyways, pretty neat story and stuff. Not much of a comment, but it's not like I binged this in one go, so I can only remember so much, nor do I got anything to point out that's spectacular. I would've liked to see more of the side characters, though. As for the ending, no specifics of course, but I didn't dislike it, and for me, an 'I'll take it' ending is nice enough. Hopefully side stories come to add on more. And then there's me and my hundreds of typo corrections in this story. It's not like I corrected everything (I'm not paid), but hopefully you (readers) can find/have found the corrections helpful.

Fallen Chronicles

Hail_The_loli
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422 Chs

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Hail_The_loli
Hail_The_loliAuthor

Thanks a ton for sticking with the story from the start! It's awesome to hear your take on everything. Man, those typo fixes? You're a lifesaver! Seriously, I can't thank you enough. Thanks for being so awesome and for sharing your thoughts!. As for the side stories, I will create them after ending Abyssal.

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