Gonna keep things real. This story has a ton of potential…but falls flat on its face. If you dont like MCs who tell family and random people they meet their important life altering secrets then DO NOT read this. The MC here is also an 18 year old virgin who is dense af. It pains me seeing books like this that cant overcome obvious flaws in the story. Author i hope you take the criticism well because honestly i stuck with the story longer than i thought.. but ultimately couldnt stomach the MCs stupidity.
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LIKEwhy don't you just say the reason with a spoiler tag? is it inconvenient to you?
Doesn't matter!! If you want the reader to know it, then do it while you do something like that. No one loves a MC eho goes around telling his secrets to everyone and yes that includes his family. What? People don't keep some secrets from their family???? Who said that? Forget abt others people do keep secrets from their families or even loved ones and some secrets are best kept secrets and we readers LOVE THAT.