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Daoist_Large_SlongLv151yr
2023-12-02 07:45

Gonna keep things real. This story has a ton of potential…but falls flat on its face. If you dont like MCs who tell family and random people they meet their important life altering secrets then DO NOT read this. The MC here is also an 18 year old virgin who is dense af. It pains me seeing books like this that cant overcome obvious flaws in the story. Author i hope you take the criticism well because honestly i stuck with the story longer than i thought.. but ultimately couldnt stomach the MCs stupidity.

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Sam_OverPoweredAuthor

if you read this story continuously, you will understand why he is revealing his secrets to people like Amelia.as for revealing his secrets to his family's was because, well, they are his family.

Sam_OverPoweredAuthor

Also he is not dense, if you have read the latest chapters you will understand this

Sam_OverPoweredAuthor

Please do leave your thoughts, I welcome your opinions, and thankful for it

Test_MiscLv4

why don't you just say the reason with a spoiler tag? is it inconvenient to you?

Sam_OverPowered:if you read this story continuously, you will understand why he is revealing his secrets to people like Amelia.as for revealing his secrets to his family's was because, well, they are his family.
Monarch_LordLv3

ooof, never reading this novel

Sam_OverPowered:if you read this story continuously, you will understand why he is revealing his secrets to people like Amelia.as for revealing his secrets to his family's was because, well, they are his family.
K7RM4Lv13

i actually read it and dont mind it much

Monarch_Lord:ooof, never reading this novel
Monarch_LordLv3

oo alrighty

K7RM4:i actually read it and dont mind it much
K7RM4Lv13

the main reason is because the overall quality is better than some stuff ive seen recently

Monarch_Lord:oo alrighty
Troubling_Rain21Lv13

the harem tag already started to deter me but thanks for the warner

Subhayan_BaagLv1

Doesn't matter!! If you want the reader to know it, then do it while you do something like that. No one loves a MC eho goes around telling his secrets to everyone and yes that includes his family. What? People don't keep some secrets from their family???? Who said that? Forget abt others people do keep secrets from their families or even loved ones and some secrets are best kept secrets and we readers LOVE THAT.

Sam_OverPowered:if you read this story continuously, you will understand why he is revealing his secrets to people like Amelia.as for revealing his secrets to his family's was because, well, they are his family.
DaoistArboreLv14

It’s genuinely embarrassing that you believe that the description “18 year old virgin” is supposed to be negative. The reason you think it’s stupid to tell people is that the genre is incredibly obsessed with backstabbing and betrayal, but that’s not always the case.

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