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Fantastic idea, but extremely badly written. Upto chap 40 it was till good. But after that this got worse by 360 degrees. Stupid MC communicated with a human evolver instead of runing away when he could have run away, putting himself in danger. Then he talked with them amd made a "deal" where he sold his freedom to stay in decorated fish tank and also let them experiment on him, in return of taking care of his sister and the other girl. (which they would have done anyways). Then he also told them that, he can improve their Cultivation methods and make them more perfect. My question is wtf did he get???? What kind of brain dead MC is this??? LITERALLY THE WHOLE MFKIN OCEAN IS FREE AND BIGGER THAN THE ENTIRE LANDMASS. He could have gotten strong slowly and left for sea, then ocean and become unbound, unrestricted, free and super strong. But this goddman studip Author and MC decided it was better in a fish tank.

AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING. Good things needs to be repeated three times. Thanks for the Book author. Please continue this novel. And please make yuji more OP

Honestly after the wish part it started falling downhill. Lile literally. Bro was granted 5 FYCKN WISHES....only to squander it uselessly. Where tf is he gonna even get enough 100k beasts for his 2 other martial souls apart from the 2 he is showing. And taking Tang Hao as foster father seriously?? ESPECIALLY after you have knowledge of beings that outmatch the entire DD verse all alone with a single finger. And he has Teleportation..unlimited Teleportation. Basically he's never getting killed as long as he is careful. Amd what's the future thought?? Peaking in DD is only a matter of time...then?? Having a system for wish which could help him travel to other universes randomly would have been far better as one of the wises.

The concept is nice, but it is very poorly written. Half of the things are not understable. Somethings, lines, words doesn't make any sense. So yeah, this is not a well writen story.

Bro this is a fire story. Loved thr power dyanmics. But you stoped writing at weird time bro. Like the least you could have done is ended the One Piece arc and showed new his new powers, classes, etc and the next world he would be going. Tbh this could be rushed in 10 chaps max, but ofc actually flow would still require at least 20-25 chaps. But please come back and atleast finish the arc.

This is one the most trash stories I've read upto date. So do you self a favor and trust me. I read upto the "free" chapters, and by far the world, the power system is cool but the MC is soooooooo trash that it pulls down the novel to bedrock level.

You are asking people to pay for this??? Literally THIS??? Upto now except for the ability which looks kinda like Solo leveling the entire rest is TRASH. Yeah well best of luck with this

This is crazy! How is this even WPA entry???now what MC will be forced to reveal his secrets and again be pushed around as a pushover and used by those powerful until one day he becomes strong enough to break the chains. Bruh??? I can collectively on behalf of almost all readers say....WE HATE A MC LIKE THAT

Exactly MY QUESTION??? AUTHOR??

Thanks for the chapter....but the choice of God left a bitter taste man. How do you even justify saying Poseidon, Zeus and Hades are the strongest??? Sure Zeus is thE CURRENT or LAST strongest God in greek pantheon. BUT they are the strongest GOD as a whole. There are Primordial gods above them and that Zeus would never amount upto. The Chaos God, The Primordial mother of Night Nyx, The Primordial God of Darkness Erebos, Gaia, the Mother of Earth and Tartarus of the Abyss. Zeus or any other God is nowhere near to their power. I understand MC not knowing that, but the way he indicated it shows he as knowledge of Greek pantheon. So why this choice???