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ShoTenLv121yr
2023-11-30 10:08

I will give a complete honest review! Okay concept people have tried here and there. Primitive boy getting a system. Fresh. Writing quality okay. But main thing lacking is relatively of main charcacter to reader, for some reason I cannot connect to the main character at all.There is one novel with somewhat similar settings but fantasy, an modern guy waking as goblin, he was fully grasped to that cultural settings yet was relatable to modern readers, I was hoping for something like that, but it's okay.Good Luck.

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ShoTen
ShoTenLv12

*Relatable

T0xicity
T0xicityLv14

What story is the goblin one?

HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxLv14

Think he means rise of the Skeleton King, a goblin shows up and is like the best side character ever

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
T0xicity
T0xicityLv14

I’ll check it out, thanks mate!

HambinoRanx:Think he means rise of the Skeleton King, a goblin shows up and is like the best side character ever
HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxLv14

Anytime King

T0xicity:I’ll check it out, thanks mate!
ShoTen
ShoTenLv12

It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
T0xicity
T0xicityLv14

Thanks to you as well mate!

ShoTen:It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Because you could empathize more with someone reincarnated instead of a primitive fool, which is why I can't read it either.

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409Lv4

maybe the Re:monster manga?

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13

bruh, that fic is trash

ShoTen:It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.
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