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ShoTen
ShoTenLv121yr
2023-11-30 18:08

I will give a complete honest review! Okay concept people have tried here and there. Primitive boy getting a system. Fresh. Writing quality okay. But main thing lacking is relatively of main charcacter to reader, for some reason I cannot connect to the main character at all.There is one novel with somewhat similar settings but fantasy, an modern guy waking as goblin, he was fully grasped to that cultural settings yet was relatable to modern readers, I was hoping for something like that, but it's okay.Good Luck.

Primitive Man

ElectricLuna
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244 Chs

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ShoTen
ShoTenLv12

*Relatable

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T0xicity
T0xicityLv14

What story is the goblin one?

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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxLv14

Think he means rise of the Skeleton King, a goblin shows up and is like the best side character ever

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
1yr
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T0xicity
T0xicityLv14

I’ll check it out, thanks mate!

HambinoRanx:Think he means rise of the Skeleton King, a goblin shows up and is like the best side character ever
1yr
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HambinoRanx
HambinoRanxLv14

Anytime King

T0xicity:I’ll check it out, thanks mate!
1yr
ShoTen
ShoTenLv12

It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
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T0xicity
T0xicityLv14

Thanks to you as well mate!

ShoTen:It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.
1yr
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Because you could empathize more with someone reincarnated instead of a primitive fool, which is why I can't read it either.

1yr
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CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409Lv4

maybe the Re:monster manga?

T0xicity:What story is the goblin one?
1yr
Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13

bruh, that fic is trash

ShoTen:It's name is *Record of orc civilization*, by BugattiCatForm.
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ElectricLuna
ElectricLunaAuthor

Hello Everyone🔥If you have any questions or requests leave them here, I will try my best to answer. Thank you for reading💖

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Wild_Zeelo
Wild_ZeeloLv10

Nice new refreshing concept. Really excited to see the future of this story. Stone age people discovering the technology is such and interesting concept.

1yr
Daoistwaterdrop
DaoistwaterdropLv14

Pre historic era book. Very interested the world, the grammar is good. The update speed is alright. You got something good here author, keep it up.

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Black_Domain
Black_DomainLv3

A different model,.Good job..Hope mc will have modern mindset.

1yr
Niazh
NiazhLv3

I would highly recommend this book to the new readers and see it in a positive light . There are going to be fantasy elements in the future right ? I have read 2 manga/manhua of this type and honestly they were great though sadly they were ruined by bad plot and other race harem stuff as the pure human feel was lost on later parts .... high hopes for this one too . so far its doing great other then the system that can get you material things that's a bit .... yeah .. everything else is good ... its good to see the mc's development . Hopefully you'll not ruin the relationships by making them his women and not calling them mom or aunt anymore 😜 the taboo fell must carry on . Good luck and well wishes.

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AniRev
AniRevLv4

I've only read the free chapters so far and it seems alright. However, the author keeps abandoning his/her older books. I'm gonna wait this out until it ends or it passes 1000ch to know for sure that the author will stick with this one. Otherwise it's a waste of time. Reading 300 chapters only to find out that the author abandoned the book is depressing.

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Loove_Zendaya
Loove_ZendayaLv1

Take 5 stars author 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥I really like this story

1yr
Sai_Fruit_centre
Sai_Fruit_centreLv4

I like the story so far just want to know if it's available somewhere else since it's really difficult to read all the chapters with limited daily pass

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Ebin_Sibi
Ebin_SibiLv4

where can i read without unlocking chapters?

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